Reviews for Naruto's Kit 2
pikachucat chapter 54 . 8/16/2014
awesome
hye1995 chapter 26 . 8/10/2014
You have quite an imagination there, Brown Phantom. Is it something you make up as you go or do you have most of it planned out already. And is it truly OC or do you take some inspiration from other sources, like books or movies?
hye1995 chapter 24 . 8/10/2014
Oh the Drama! A young defenseless girl being spirited away by men with evil intents(i assume)! It's almost unBEARable!
hye1995 chapter 15 . 8/10/2014
I can see the good thing about being mostly immune to sedation, but it seems like a less useful thing to have. Imagine being so hurt, that you'd have to be operated, and being unable to be sedated. That gotta hurt
14 chapter 27 . 7/30/2014
Good story and plot like it. Add lemon for akane and her teammate with blue hair when on a mission good plot
Guest chapter 54 . 7/24/2014
Akane: *grabs Sakura by the arm and yanks her to Akanes face* retract your decision or I'll burn off your hair, perminantly!
Hektols chapter 54 . 7/24/2014
Very interesting techniques, very creative.

Wonder if Sakura is completely aware of Akane's healing power, it would be funny if just at the begining of the next chapter she completely healed herself and proved that she is in better condition than her adversary.
kill3rdarren chapter 54 . 7/23/2014
YES AN UPDATTTTEEEE. OMG I MISSED THIS FIC. but akane :( no! Why did u do it sakura? WHYYYYYY?!
Guest chapter 53 . 6/6/2014
When is chapter 54 coming on. I know u are not leaving us with shion and the baby mystery. Please brown phantom u are the only one of the longer fanfictions I read. Everyone else kind of becomes lazy in there writing style but u do not
pikachucat chapter 53 . 6/3/2014
awesome
Chewie Cookies chapter 53 . 4/25/2014
Great fight scene, friend-o!

Keep up the good work!
61394 chapter 53 . 4/24/2014
great fight and of course Kakashi knows other raiton jutsus then lightning blade
Fleightfire chapter 53 . 4/24/2014
You know now do I think of it Shion should just stay in the village, it's kind of mean that she and her daughter have to live so far away
Chewie Cookies chapter 52 . 4/14/2014
Good stuff so far, friend-o! I have no idea why it took me so long to read these last three chapters...

Keep up the good work!
Chewie Cookies chapter 50 . 4/14/2014
No offense, but it looks like you accidentally cut some of the scene with Shiba off prematurely. I figured I should let you know.
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