Reviews for The Man Upstairs
pepperxxx chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
That was really good! A bit creepy, but sometimes the best fanfics are.
unusedaccount1177 chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
This was amazing. You did a wonderful job with the second person pov. You painted such a vivid picture, bringing every character to life in only a few short sentences. They were very interesting characters in themselves, and each one drove the story a little further.

This story was brillant and very well written. I loved the ending, it wrapped it up nicely and left a lasting impression. I really liked how you used indirect characterization and made Sylar and Mohinder distinct and themselves. It had a great flow, too.

Thank you for the wonderful read. Keep writing.
Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Normally I don't like 2nd pov stories, but this is outstanding! I love how well you let us as the reader travel through the building, asking different tenants their opinion of Mohinder and Sylar. I adore how everyone has such a different opinion, each revealing a little more of the story, and how each person is so characteristic and real even if they only have a paragraph or two. You've done a fantastic job with this story, thanks for sharing it with us!
starlightcity chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
This story is so good that it makes me jealous. I love your use of the second person. I love how you describe all of the neighbors so clearly in only a few sentences each. I love the ending. Very good job.
Dapples and greys chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Great story, slightly darkish, really cool.
queenoftheoutlands chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Woah... That is actually almost terrifying. Well done