|Reviews for This Life Will be Better|
| Lunokii chapter 31 . 6/25/2013
| technoWriter15 chapter 2 . 9/17/2011
| technoWriter15 chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
| Steam-Wolf chapter 31 . 10/26/2010
I loved the ending and hope you can make the sequel soon
| fallenfaeangel chapter 31 . 10/6/2010
Oh please make a sequal! I would love to see the love between Adam and Victoria grow more in depth. It is so wonderful. There is so many possibilities of a new life, an alien life. I am a romance fan. Victoria could even become on of them. I just love your story and hope to read more of your work and would love so dearly to read a sequal! Bravo!
| NITRO PSYCHO chapter 31 . 10/4/2010
what a dramatic ending. and this isn't trying to rush you or anything but uh, START THE SEQUEL ALREADY. i didn't get to see Torri and Adam get married.
| lala chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
hrmm so im guessing you deleted my last review?
well well well, someone doesn't like people pointing obvious faults in their story now, huh?
victoria's a mary sue and the plot isn't stable.
two factors that desperately need working on to improve
| NITRO PSYCHO chapter 30 . 9/2/2010
dang, you work fast.
| Ember Filled Mist chapter 20 . 8/22/2010
-.- You left it at a cliffhanger... That is eval. xD I want moooore! And, now I am sad... I can't believe it is almost over!
| NITRO PSYCHO chapter 20 . 8/20/2010
aw man, too many cliffhanger. i like it. i hope Adam gots to marry Victoria by the end of this. you should consider it. oh, and i hope you read my story and review it as well. together we can take this archive by storm.
| Nolongerinuse0000001 chapter 20 . 8/19/2010
| NITRO PSYCHO chapter 19 . 8/16/2010
uh i hate to rush you or anything, but uh... HURRY UP AND GET THE NEXT CHAPTER IN ALREADY. THIS STORY'S TOO ADDICTING
| Ember Filled Mist chapter 19 . 8/16/2010
well gee, that is mighty evil of you! Leaving all of these cliffhangers. xDDD Great chapter by the way! Hope you will enjoy writing the next chapter.
| Ember Filled Mist chapter 18 . 8/8/2010
Seeee, doesn't it feel good to let it all out? xDDD Well, to Victoria I think I would be relieved to be able to tell as many people as I possibly could so I could be proud xD I like what your are doing with the timeline of the movie with the timeline of your story- pretty awesome Can't wait for the next chapter.
| J.J chapter 17 . 8/7/2010
your so good at ciff-hangers