Reviews for Unfinished Business
Anonymous chapter 32 . 10/3
Well, I don't exactly understand the 'Rin' part. So who's the babys father? Obito?
Oh, my review is...the story is awesome,'Perfect Beauty'! :)
angry chapter 32 . 8/9/2013
What the fuck dude?! i absolutely luved this story and i was looking forward for the ending and this is wat i get?! does this story have an epilogue or something? Please tell me that it does... and wait, does that mean that rin slept w/ minato?! O.o
Jerza Fernandes chapter 32 . 5/1/2013
I don't quite understand the ending.. Rim with kakashi?
Nao chapter 32 . 5/26/2012
I'm pretty confused.

If Rin is pregnant then who's the father? (Thinking Kakashi LOL.) And why was the test at Minato's place?

I kinda have a bad feeling it could be Jiraiya since Tsunade said that Orochimaru is the father of Mikoto's baby.

-Rips hair out-
mywinterfairy chapter 12 . 5/10/2012

kushina be strong :)

and i loveeeeee this story it's totallly awesome! :D and sorry cause you know what i talk about mikoto sorrry can't help it... -_-"
Bexteron chapter 2 . 4/11/2012
I really liked this chapter. I thought it had a nice mix of light humour when Kushina was missing her poor ramen and when she thought that she felt concieted because people may be looking at her because she thought she was pretty. Its only natrual to feel that way, you start to notice your own good looks ;D

I also liked how you decribed her. As I was reading, the words fleshed her out, making her 3 dimensional and I could see her in my mind. Awesome. I also liked that she was noticing changes, not only about herself but the village. Its natrual that she would feel a little out of sorts about its change considering she hadn't been there in years.

Great chapter Lakey :D
Bexteron chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
I liked this first chapter. Short but descriptive and conveyed the emotions the character was feeling; her regret and her sense of fear of going back after leaving was well done. It made it believable. Second chapter here I come :D
TachiAsh chapter 32 . 12/1/2011
I loving this story so far i just wish it was complete please upload the next chapters if you are still writing this story.
muzikchic4eva chapter 32 . 6/30/2011
ohmygod. rin is pregnant? who's the father? not minato, i hope. i really didn't want him to be a pedophile..

please update sooon!
asddfgjkl chapter 21 . 11/6/2010
She stared back at me. It was not Kushina I saw.

It was...


'What the fuck is this?'

asdfghjkl chapter 11 . 11/6/2010

*stabs plastic fork repeatedly in the eye*

Humph! No more sharingan fer you, betch.

anyway, nice chapter, I love it. XD
artist VS.poet chapter 32 . 6/9/2010
this is a great story but i think u put too many obstacles..but i think u should continue it
em chapter 32 . 5/31/2010
Please oh please oh please continue this story!

I just love your writing style, and can't wait for

your next story.

Thank you so much for your hard work :D
JaMisa27 chapter 32 . 5/19/2010
so did minato cheat on kushina with rin or what
LizKuchiki chapter 32 . 5/16/2010
OH. MY. GOD. O.o- I cannot speak, wait, I just did, to the heck with it. That was the best end EVER...Although it sucked, it's still awesome! THERE MUST BE A SEQUELLLLL, sequellllllllll, And If you can't do it you must let someone do it or something, wahhhh, i'll dieee. I completley fell in love with this story. You're a goooodddd! *bows*
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