Reviews for Ethereal Ennui
WhiteHare chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I like that you show Annie as someone with deep feelings too. I often feel like she gets short-changed in terms of meaty storylines (no pun intended) in favour of the boys and floats around being fluffy and making tea.
Rhesus Monkey chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
This is so beautifully written. It is truly heartbreaking how you portray Annie's quite desperation as she watches the boys drift away, as she begins to feel herself losing all connections to the outside world.
Nyrihaz chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
This is hauntig; considering how season two ended. You sum up Annie so well in this-her fears, her understanding, her emotions.

"Whatever the reason, George and Mitchell won't miss her. Not for long, anyway." -well, she was wrong in that at least ;),considering their-speacially Mitchell's-reactions to her... well whatever it is that happened to her. Because it can't really cualify as death right?

Nice short story.


WeepingAngel123 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010

You wrote this really well from Annie's POV, and I think you summed up all of Annie's thoughtsfeelings very naiicely! The mood and tone of this was fab too!

And the end was just perfectly perfect! Luurved it muchily! - "For once, Annie doesn't make any tea today, while they're both out at work. Instead, she hunts the house for abandoned mugs, collects them all, washes them up and puts them away. It's not a beginning. It's not even the end of a beginning. But it is, perhaps, the beginning of the end."

In case you haven't seen, D: :O at tonight's finale!

Cakes and cookies and milk to you! X D
coffee dazed chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
well written, i liked ur take on annie's introspection

Frailly chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Aww this is beautiful! Well written and lovely!
sucka chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
great! i know that's not much so i guess i'll try to expand. you put into words (perfectly, i might add) how annie's feeling. your analysis (via annie) of mitchell and george is also spot-on.