Reviews for Concrete Angel
JAW7 chapter 5 . 1/20/2014
Amazing collection u have. When I read them I felt as if I was getting to know the characters more. I also likes how your one-shots filled in the gaps that Riordain left almost seamlessly (I think that's the word...)
icesong180 chapter 5 . 1/13/2013
i really like your writing style. and i'll admit it, i cried in some parts. please continue!
Crazy Female LEPrecon chapter 5 . 5/15/2012
I love your story. Please write another drabble chapter; I love it; Annabeth is my favorite character.

Crazy Female LEPrecon
made a new account chapter 5 . 11/8/2011
Have I ever said how much I love this?It always makes me cry,but I don't care,I love this fanfiction,it's honestly one of the bests I've ever seen!I think you could make the next chapter Grover finding them...I know it's been like,a year you don't update,but I really hope you read this and update as soon as you can! *
Ferretess xxx chapter 5 . 9/20/2011
This is a really great fic! Wonderful job, now update soon please! It's nearly been a year! I hope you haven't abandoned this...
cassTastrohpe chapter 5 . 7/25/2011
Duuude... That was depressing, and awesome. It was depresome.
Live.Love.Twix27 chapter 5 . 3/25/2011
Love it.
Clara Fonteyn chapter 5 . 10/17/2010
Aw...and I was SO looking forward to reading something crappy, and then you write something so freaking awesome and then I have NOTHING to flame! This is NOT FAIR!

...

...Obviously that last replay of Bury Me Alive succeeded in killing some brain cells. Or maybe it was those donuts. (Don't worry, I saved half for you. They're right behind Ricky's shoulders.)

I have no idea what you classify as GOOD writing if you call this crappy... (and if you say 'your writing' I will not hesitate in wrenching someone's middle finger off and UPSing it to you). I'll give you a detailed version on why I love this so much tomorrow. :D

Anyway...are you POSITIVE that you don't want to switch writing styles? I would't mind. At all. *makes handsome homeless boy face. when it doesn't work, makes miserable Annabeth face*

:* Mira
Wings of the Raven chapter 4 . 10/14/2010
I've read this chapter a million times, but everyone I do, it makes me cry...it makes me sound totally emo, but I love it for that! :')
BookshelfAwesomeness chapter 5 . 10/13/2010
LOL, I loved the author's notes. I'll buy the Procrastination Pill! :)

Once again, this chapter was touching. I love how you portray the characters. It shows why Annabeth kept defending Luke. I like him a lot more now. :)

Do I even have to mention how much talent you have?
KarmaBear2050 chapter 2 . 9/15/2010
"I'm standing in a storm."

That was very well done, and it shed a light upon what people rarely think about Annabeth.

I mean, she was a child once too, and she had a much harder life then Percy, fending for herself. Yet, it's always everyone raving for Percy...

*Sigh*

Great chapter!
KarmaBear2050 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Annabeth!

Anna!

Hello again!

I'm sorry, it's taken me forever to reply to you, but I've had cousins and aunts...and finally school beginning ;)

This. Is. Brilliant.

That's all I can say, I mean your language draws people in, and your descriptions are very well done.

I'm going to continue on then!
made a new account chapter 4 . 9/1/2010
I LOVE THIS STORY!Its so sad but I like it a lot...I cried when I read the first chapter,It's SO sad and SO well writen...Update soon,please!
SquishyChknXD chapter 4 . 8/17/2010
every single chapter is so well written! you're a FANTASTIC author. no joke!
Emily-Of-Midgard chapter 4 . 8/17/2010
This was really good. I'd give a more coherent review if it wasn't late and I wasn't on my iPod touch
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