Reviews for Concrete Angel
Krystaltheelemental chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
JAW7 chapter 5 . 1/20/2014
Amazing collection u have. When I read them I felt as if I was getting to know the characters more. I also likes how your one-shots filled in the gaps that Riordain left almost seamlessly (I think that's the word...)
icesong180 chapter 5 . 1/13/2013
i really like your writing style. and i'll admit it, i cried in some parts. please continue!
Crazy Female LEPrecon chapter 5 . 5/15/2012
I love your story. Please write another drabble chapter; I love it; Annabeth is my favorite character.

Crazy Female LEPrecon
made a new account chapter 5 . 11/8/2011
Have I ever said how much I love this?It always makes me cry,but I don't care,I love this fanfiction,it's honestly one of the bests I've ever seen!I think you could make the next chapter Grover finding them...I know it's been like,a year you don't update,but I really hope you read this and update as soon as you can! *
Ferretess xxx chapter 5 . 9/20/2011
This is a really great fic! Wonderful job, now update soon please! It's nearly been a year! I hope you haven't abandoned this...
cassTastrohpe chapter 5 . 7/25/2011
Duuude... That was depressing, and awesome. It was depresome.
Live.Love.Twix27 chapter 5 . 3/25/2011
Love it.
Clara Fonteyn chapter 5 . 10/17/2010
Aw...and I was SO looking forward to reading something crappy, and then you write something so freaking awesome and then I have NOTHING to flame! This is NOT FAIR!


...Obviously that last replay of Bury Me Alive succeeded in killing some brain cells. Or maybe it was those donuts. (Don't worry, I saved half for you. They're right behind Ricky's shoulders.)

I have no idea what you classify as GOOD writing if you call this crappy... (and if you say 'your writing' I will not hesitate in wrenching someone's middle finger off and UPSing it to you). I'll give you a detailed version on why I love this so much tomorrow. :D

Anyway...are you POSITIVE that you don't want to switch writing styles? I would't mind. At all. *makes handsome homeless boy face. when it doesn't work, makes miserable Annabeth face*

:* Mira
Wings of the Raven chapter 4 . 10/14/2010
I've read this chapter a million times, but everyone I do, it makes me makes me sound totally emo, but I love it for that! :')
BookshelfAwesomeness chapter 5 . 10/13/2010
LOL, I loved the author's notes. I'll buy the Procrastination Pill! :)

Once again, this chapter was touching. I love how you portray the characters. It shows why Annabeth kept defending Luke. I like him a lot more now. :)

Do I even have to mention how much talent you have?
Lady Scribble chapter 2 . 9/15/2010
"I'm standing in a storm."

That was very well done, and it shed a light upon what people rarely think about Annabeth.

I mean, she was a child once too, and she had a much harder life then Percy, fending for herself. Yet, it's always everyone raving for Percy...


Great chapter!
Lady Scribble chapter 1 . 9/15/2010


Hello again!

I'm sorry, it's taken me forever to reply to you, but I've had cousins and aunts...and finally school beginning ;)

This. Is. Brilliant.

That's all I can say, I mean your language draws people in, and your descriptions are very well done.

I'm going to continue on then!
made a new account chapter 4 . 9/1/2010
I LOVE THIS STORY!Its so sad but I like it a lot...I cried when I read the first chapter,It's SO sad and SO well writen...Update soon,please!
SquishyChknXD chapter 4 . 8/17/2010
every single chapter is so well written! you're a FANTASTIC author. no joke!
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