|Reviews for She went away, and then I took a different path|
| SiriusBalisticPretzels chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
| Crosseine chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
When You're Gone by Avril, right? hm...i like that song...
hiks2...now i wonder...everything we achieve will just come and go right...hohoho
hm, i like it...
| hashire chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Hm. Kanda isn't the only one that's out of character here. Why would Lenalee leave? Yeah, okay, she feels overwhelmed, but, everyone else aside, would she really just leave when her brother is still there? Since Kanda's OOCness was already acknowledged at the beginning, I won't go into it. One last thing: in the last part(s), when pluralizing some words, you ended up making them either possessive or contractions. For example, "He fell to his knee's." To his knees' what? Knees, trees, and, in this instance, its (its pointed path) don't need apostrophes.