|Reviews for Twitter, The Secret Story|
| LrafaelxD chapter 7 . 6/29/2013
The story is cool and hot.
| ShadowFlamePanther chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Seeing no one here is going to do this, I am going to have to..
One. If your going to write a mature fiction, even a crack fiction, make sure to be old enough to do so and to use proper lingo..
It's not called organism
It's called an orgasm
Two.. you would do really well with a beta reader and spell check.
Don't rush your stories just to get the chapters out. I love crack fiction as much as the next person but seriously, you should pair this in just the single person because jared and paul would mean slash and you don't have none of that here. I hope you do take the time to slow down and write longer chapters with better person point of view. You rushed the scenes too much. You crammed too much into one chapter. These chapters are more drabbles then actual chapters and your threesome chapter was very poorly written. Even a small male would have torn Kim to the point of sever agony by ramming in like Embry did with no prep. Do your research and your stories will be better. Not a flame, just suggestions.
| Peacelover56 chapter 7 . 8/6/2011
cant wait for the next chapter
| XXXOneOfThePackXXX chapter 7 . 3/19/2011
OMG u should totallyy finish this story
| Kennedy Wolf Cullen chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
Wow... That was... gross.
| weflytothetardis chapter 7 . 8/28/2010
| JacobFan chapter 7 . 8/20/2010
Lol woot woot! I love leah!
| laurazuleta18 chapter 7 . 8/19/2010
| toshii519 chapter 7 . 8/19/2010
i love it this story is so funny
| thekouhaitoyoursenpai chapter 7 . 8/19/2010
awesome chap. but only 1 more left? y cant there b more? i like this! n i wanna noe where leah learned the moves, lol.
| Kaitlyn19 chapter 6 . 8/2/2010
Get well soon(:
| alwaysrunningplaces chapter 6 . 7/26/2010
I hope you get well soon! I totaly understand your delay and dont worry i can wait for the next chapter since you have a good excuse;)
| MissMy chapter 6 . 7/25/2010
I wish you well!
| HazylShy chapter 2 . 7/17/2010
Haha... I love that short short man song... :) Love this story, btw.
| KatieBabyBay chapter 5 . 6/9/2010
I cringed the whole time reading this. I couldn't sit still. But Jared's time will come and Leah is gonna give it to him. GO LEAH xxx