|Reviews for The Last Battle|
| Rachel chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Perfection, but utterly heartbreaking!
| iceriver223 chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
I never saw that happening great job!
| BetahimeTsukiko chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
That was so amazing, I hate you. You left it at practically the same place where their dad was in TSRTS when he said yes to Michael in order to save Mary from Anna;NOT COOL! I know that's the only reason Dean is Michael's bitch right now, because he wanted Sammy not to have to be Lucifer's bitch! Waaaaaaaah, you're horrible! TT
| BarbaraGER chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Wow. Now that left me curious :-D
First of all, I like they way you portrayed the characters, I think you managed to bring their feelings and emotions from earlier seasons in. Dean being the brave, big brother with the 'No one hurts my little bro and gets away with it'attitude; Sam being all emo and careful and doubting. In my opinion they lost those features in season 4 (sad but true), that's why I'm quite happy you wrote them like this anyway.
Your Lucifer's brilliant, too. That calm, almost friendly nature that made him (in my opinion) somtimes hard to dislike.
While I read, I was wondering the whole time how you would going to solve the problem – as there was no deathfic warning (a warning I don't like by the way because come on, where's the thrill in reading when I know that no one's gonna die – or someone will). I was really excited and tense while I read your story because I couldn't figure out a solution for that gory mess the boys have buried themselves in.
Anyway, I'm going to browse through your other fics, too, so maybe you'll read from me again later!
Thanks for writing and sharing! Take care!
| PorcelainHeart chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Omg, that was intense. The ending was EPIC!
| Rosetta Brunestud chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Great fanfic! Really, great! It's hard to say anything else... There was so much sadness and hope and everything... I REALLY don't know what to say... Is congratulations enough?
Congratulations, then D
See ya around o/
| AllieMcD chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
I loved this it was amazing!
| babyreaper chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
That was a fantastic story sorry that it ended that way, I love Dean too much to actually read deathfics about him. A sequel or another chapter would be great and I can't wait to read more, How will Sam react to Castiel keeping him alive? How will he manage to live with the knowledge of what he has done. Please post ..
| anka-x chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Very good story.
| I'mcalledZorro chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Great story! Wonderful twists! Hope you get that next chap. up VERY soon! I will be looking for it!
| 1983Sarah chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Great story! I really can't wait to read what else you have, I guess I'm just a sucker for tragedy, but with a hint of hope at the end!
| aXforamnesty chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
:jawdrop: holy...shit! oh holy geez! that was AWESOME! i'm not worthy! youre so incredibly talented! and wow-za that's a new twist/idea that hadnt occured to me before!
you rock! what incredible talent you have!
| xxdevil9xx chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Holy lord jesus. That was freakin amazing! I dont know what else to say...besides more please!
| anon chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
No the deathfic you prepared us for, and it was really well done. Very powerful ending, and set up perfectly with Dean already basically dead but just the act of having to finish it, oh so powerful.
I got a little annoyed with all of Dean's last words being to comfort Sam, but that is sadly true to the show and their dynamic. Sam's never really gotten better about that to this day. And the devil taunting Dean with hell, though no one in their right mind would think a soul that bright would ever go there again, but it's very in character for Luci. Though I'd guess, being shot with the colt wouldn't that destroy his soul? Hmm. Maybe, at least without angelic or godly intervention. Makes Dean's last plan even more brilliant. Honestly, the part that seemed the cruelest to me was that Castiel saved Sam. He didn't want to be saved at that point, who would. Asking him to live and be sane after having killed his brother like that, that's just too much. And if he did, honestly that's a Sam I wouldn't like or want to know anyway. Both should live or both should die or it just wouldn't feel right.
| CBloom2 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Wow! I was totally transfixed with that story! Couldn't take my eyes away until I had absorbed all the words!
Excellent work! Looking forward to the sequal!