Reviews for Truth Monster
kiki-chan3410 chapter 1 . 3/22
You know what it couldn't have been them since Miroku slipped on the wooden floor right? And they had carpet in their home! But then the carpet could have been changed... Now I'm confused. Good job you broke me! Lol but this is an awesome story, especially that ending, though. It really triggers you. I know I was. XD
Shirahime Shou95 chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
Good lord, I think I enjoyed this story WAY too much than I should have. I normally don't read twisted, and horror fictions. But this story really caught me in.
I was 100% sure that Inuyasha and Kagome were not the murderer until about 3/4 of the story when I decided to scroll down the page. I saw that there's only a few more paragraphs left and I think, hey it's weird.. the story almost came to an end but there's no clue whatsoever about who might did it.. (I assumed you're gonna reveal the real murderer at the end), so I started to have suspicion. Could Inuyasha and Kagome really did it? Then I read the rest of the story- and (as cliche as it might sound) had my mind completely blown away. Bravo. Thanks for sharing this story for us to enjoy and take care! :)
IceMageNinjaTalia chapter 1 . 8/13/2015
Wait...what the fuck? Did they do it? If they didn't who did? Don't leave me with questions I hate that! D: and how the hell did it end up in the wall?
LaraWinner chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
Okaaaayyyy... So first off I had to read this twice because that was definitely a nice twist at the end. Upon second reading when I got to that part when Inu asks "How many times did you throw up?" and Kag replies "Enough." it hit me that the inflection wasn't one of concern but a successful lie. So I don't doubt for a second that they did it but I have my speculation on how it happened. Simply enough Hojo's flirting caused Inu to lose his shit and it just snowballed out of control from there. I think Kagome has blocked a bit of what happened out or maybe she wasn't there as it happened but she definitely knew and would obviously do anything to protect Inu, even help him cover up a murder.

Or to make this disturbing story even more insane, they both did it and yet have convinced themselves they didn't.

Either way this fic is awesomely twisted and unsettling. Job well done.
Blackdiamonds-16 chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
This was so interesting! I loved it! Thanks for posting!
TachiMakoto chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
I love this story...but I didn't really understand what happened...could you please explain it to me? .
airwad chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
NOOOOOO! I WANNA' KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
OMG great job :D :D :D
NiceStories chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
It's like 'Booh-muhahaha'.. you are evil. Truly and utterly evil. I love it and the murderer iiiis.. *forever unknown*
bookworminpeace chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
My friend Actually recommended this Story, And then i ranted to her about my Theories... Then she told me to tell you...

Because Kikyo could Be tring to Frame Kagome and Inyasha for Revenge, and Done the whole thing.

Though it seems more like something Naraku would do. Playing with Peoples Emotions and Stuff.

These 2 Theories could be in an All human universe or Cannon Verse.

So the main Question would be, Did you Intend for this story to be all human? like So Inuyasha isn't a Demon? or can it Be cannon?

because then they Could have went to the past and Spent Valentines day there, giving someone more time to kill Hojo.

or They still could've gone to the passed, and Pissed someone off like normal, and then Wanting Revenge Killed him.

Or the more fun Version that I think fits the most...

Is that Someone Kidnapped them and then Killed Hojo in front of them, Which explains how Kagome kinda has Flashbacks. and Why Inuyasha is So Protective (but he kinda always is so its not that different) and then Kagome had a bunch of mood swings which could be an affect from Seeing a man killed.

Or both of them could have Alternate personalities and Killed him...

Or Inuyasha did kill him... and Kagome kinda knew he did it but wasn't sure, Hence the imagining of what happened and mood swings...

Or Hojo somehow figured out about Inuyasha's Secret and Got himself killed and Kagome knew it was their fault but didn't kill him...

...

So now the Question is...

What the Heck did you Actually mean?

cause seriously, This is going to bug me...
DormySaz chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Wow! What a twist at the end.. Scary!
Jingyee1511 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Freaky. *shivers* By the fact that it was meant to be horror/crime, it's very well done. The gruesome details that Ayame relayed that made Kagome throw up, the eventual recovering of the body by Miroku and Sango... But the fact that you chose Inuyasha and Kagome as the suspects cum murders... It's disturbing, but I guess it was meant to be so? ._. The last people we would want to believe were murderers... Good job yeah.
InuGirl4ever12 chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Immm confuuuseeddd :/
ananova chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Well you sure know how to leave a reader with a lot of questions. I guess we could believe either that someone was trying to frame Kag & Inu or they really were murderers. Though that part at the end about how everyone thought that they died makes me lean more toward that they killed him and faked their deaths.

But I agree, even though I am filled with questions at the ending, it reads better without a continuation. Better to leave it to the reader's imagination.
Kireina Koe chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
This story was amazing! I also live off endings like that, so I must say... INSTA-FAV!1
alikmionejean chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
BUT IT'S TRIPPY! I DON'T GET IT! Well... that's a lie, yes I do. You're making them disappear off the map, making it seem like they did it blah blah blah...

Doesn't make it any less trippy.

It was good though. I was like, "Where did Sango and Miroku come from?" Ohhhhhh...

LOL I'm sorry this one isn't as life-stealing as the previous one I left you (No kidding, it takes your whole life to read it.) So, I'll go now! MWAH!

Love from,

alikmionejean
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