i have three favourite answers out of that and they are:
root
kahhhhhn!
headmaster
in that order
i think i would have accepted the ghostbusters theme as whaat actually happened because that was just fantastic

What. The. Hell. What was that with Pettigrew? He's not Scabbers in here? Where is he?

That last part was so intense I almost forgot to ask something. Will it ever be explained how exactly the twins did what they did?

I still don't understand what Dumbledore implied when he said that Quirrel is already doomed. If anyone read this review, could you tell me what was it?

I must say... This is most definitely the most enjoyable chapter of any Harry Potter fic I've ever read. And Dumbledore, well I'm really pleased to see that he is still as mad, as powerful, and (more importantly), as sincere as he seems to be in canon. Congratulations for that.

Now I'm greatly curious as to what the heck was Quirrel's/Voldy's strategy showing off like that

Why did McGonnagal only questioned Harry and never the other students?

Did you ever actually explain who was it who had The Invisibility Cloak in your story? I can't think of anyone with the sufficient knowledge and position, and who is trusted enough by James to borrow the cloak and still has access to give it to Harry at the same time

You know, my biggest problem with Harry Potter au fics is usually the OOCness of the characters, mostly The Weasley's. And yet in this chapter, from Draco to Ron and even the twins, I only found one thing out of character: that Molly would blurt out Harry's name. Even then it could've been an accident born out of surprise. So congratulations for that..

His feet have been touching the found long enough to partially transfigure it into acid or lava pools below the death eaters

I've been reading this almost nonstop for the past week. My eyes are so tired, and my thoughts are a little scrambled, but it was so worth it. Thank you for writing it.

I find your story interesting but exhausting. There is so much self inflated male energy it needs to be read in small doses. The mantra of "I have the best ideas, mine are the best" rings off the page much like listening to Trump and many boys and men who can't possibly be wrong or care who they affect. I'm not saying Your Harry doesn't care, but it's so wrapped up in his vision and yours that frankly I can't stomach that energy for long. I hope you tone it down as the story seems good. Maybe if I wait to read it after the election it will seem less objectionable.
Kali

I tried. It's a very interesting theory, and the technical detail you put into the story is impressive, but your writing style just isn't appealing to me. Not a critique just a personal sensibility. impressive story either way sorry I'm unable to remain interested in it.

I love your story so much. Keep up the great work don't let the haters still u down, if u have any boy of course. Chapter 5 made me die of laughter

I remember vividly in 2013 seeing a post on Tumblr or something for this fanfic that had a ton of notes along with a comment of "this fanfiction absolutely wrecks me every time," or something, and I went on believing that it was some sort of crazy psychological mindfuckery. Fast forward three more years and for some reason I'm just now getting into Harry Potter fanfiction (read: drarry,) and I've decided that after reading roughly 2.5 million words of mindless drarry relationship fics with no real plot, that I'm going to read COMPLETELY through this one, no matter how much nausea, sweating, and crying it brings me. You won't believe how many time I've just closed the tab on a fanfic because it's gotten too much. Anyway, at first this fic was just so brilliant and I loved it (it's a lot like a fanfic called The Spellmaker, which I loved but it was unfinished,) but I've just started to get halfway through the scene where Dumbledore calls Harry into his office drooling all over the Invisibility Cloak and my brain is really just fried. I've mostly been skimming because this fic just has so many words, and so much scientific theory that I don't understand, and too many things for my brain to comprehend. Right now I'm just laying here with an actual headache and lines of text embossed over my vision. But I don't know, there's something so strange about this fic, kind of like that the characters don't feel like actual people. Well. Harry's a little very much not... normal, and Draco's not really Draco in the way that everyone writes him first year (maybe without the rape thing, sometimes things in fanfics just really really weird me out for example an 11 year old making rape threats,) and I don't know. It just seems like a crack fic so far. And it's not just because of the length and the words! I've read fics like Turn and Drop Dead Gorgeous and I Give You a Wondrous Mirror and 2! .5! million! words! of! mind! numbing! drarry! fic! Have I mentioned that I've read 2.5 million words of drarry fic in the past month! And so it seems sort of stupid for me not to be able to take this one on. But it just gets so weird and tiring, and the whole "house divide" thing is just so potent here where all Slytherins are all really evil rapists, and Harry's just fucking crazy, and there's no really relationship development anywhere. I'm not just saying this because I'm a wild drarry shipper, I honestly can't imagine shipping this Draco and this Harry, but it's like I'm reading an entirely different story where really only the character's names are the same but everything else is entirely different. I don't know. Reading longer fics is such an emotional rollercoaster for me that one minute I'm quivering because the fic is so good and I can barely breathe, but the next I'm feeling all slimy and nauseous and asking myself where everything went wrong. I don't know. I was really really sick last night or it could just be those "crazy teenage emotional hormones" that everybody says is now the basis of my personality, but I don't know. I really just got out of bed at noon this morning after having a really wonderful drarry dream that I wanted to enjoy further in some nice fic, but somehow stumbled upon a buzzfeed rec post that reminded me of this and here we are. I don't know. Maybe I really am just a mindless drarry shipper. Anyway, your fic is good. I am not so good. Also not sure where you found the time to write literally 600k words of crazy scientific weird stuff. I will finish this after I've had some toast and water and also maybe a couple weeks off of school.