|Reviews for Love in My Box|
| Raffinie chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Cutest thing EVER. seriously, this is brilliant! i LOVE it!
| mjwpg chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Edward is so cute you just want to eat him up, lol
So will this just be emails or will they eventually meet again?
| Kefe chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
This sounds like a really cute story. I laughed at certain parts.
Looking forward to more.
| readingmama chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
This story is absolutely fabulous. Oh my goodness I thought I was going to die a couple places in this chapter they are so cute. I loved that he is studying to rectify his sexual prowess. Lol
keep up the good work!
| readingmama chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Love it, this looks like it is going to be a fun ride!
| forgotten22 chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
He definitely is forthwith isn't he? haha I love it! :D
I didn't even dry myself off properly (I had just showered after my soccer practice). That's how eager I was to read your reply (a wet keyboard is an accident waiting to happen). - LOL My mind was definitely in the gutter on the title of this story... But nice to see he was showering ;D And wet of course ! ;D
So you think god is a woman, huh? I don't have any feeling on this matter because no one has provided me with empirical data to support any hypothesis of merit. - Aww hehe See, our nerdy side of Edward He's so cute! I just want to eat him up! :*
Ohmygosh! Im dying! :D You ladies are awesome! I totally love you! :D Edward... 'As far as not knowing what "got into you" that night, I hope you remember, um, that it was me. Right? ? I mean, I didn't get it all the way in, but I can try harder next time. I really hope there will be a next time.' - Haha! Seriously You make me laugh. I could probably just sit here and quote your whole story I love it so much :D
To answer your question – I picked you because you are the loveliest woman I had ever seen. Period. - AW *Swoon* :D
After I realized that she wasn't talking about soccer, I consulted the Urban Dictionary online and realized that she was correct. I don't have 'game.' (meaning-a measure of smoothness with the opposite sex; lines or moves you use to get the opposite sex into bed) Please don't hold that against me. - again, AWW haha LOVE!
Now as for Bella :D You can sit wet somewhere else. The bed would be a completely safe and appropriate place for you to be wet…and naked…after your shower. - Umm yes please! ;D
I heart Bella just as much as Edward. She is so sweet and kind! I love how she jokes and it goes right over his head lol Which, in turn, I love their flirting also. Adorable and sweet and romantic and corny and cute and... You both are doing awesome! I love it!
Lol Edward makes me giggle out loud! Im sure worried wasn't what Bella was when thinking about you naked in bed sweetheart.. ;) Or your posture for that matter.. And again Lol at his lack of getting humor. And "I am also attempting to use the Urban Dictionary's word of the day to appear more fun in my everyday conversations." haha I heart him, seriously!
I was going to end up quoting your whole chapter back to you if I didn't put myself on hold.. sorry about that haha I just absolutely LOVE this! You two are amazing and crack me up! I also heart your texts and was thinking of mentioning that it could be a story of its own in my first review too, but then I thought it probably would be really dirty. haha, but seriously, a hoot to read! ;D lol and fuckhot, yes, agreed lol
Ok this review is turning into a book of its own. Sorry about that, hope its not annoying :X Again, LOVE your story, LOVE you and I cannot wait till the next chapter! Great job ladies! xx
| twilighterNY chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
*I hope this comes out as it's intended*
To: Cosmo and Marvar
Subject: Thank you
It certainly made my day as I was woken up 4 times a night before because someone's teething-it's not fun. At all. It's hard to read their emails without spouting all possible dirty words into the gutter party. Wait what was I trying to say again?
"And maybe you didn't 'get in' all the way…to be completely honest…I wasn't sure you would fit. God, this is embarrassing."
Sincerely, L.I.M.B Lover
| forgotten22 chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
HAHA I love you two! You are awesome! Your beginning A/N had me in a fit of giggles. And that Details shoot was fucking HOT! :D
I loved EPOV.. Im not sure what I would have done if I were Bella and received a email like that? haha But sounds like they have one awesome night together in Miami :) He is so cute and adorable yet geeky/smart I love it :D And his lotion line. Haha! Yeah ;)
I hope things work out well for them!
I love that Bella's god is a female :)And she is studying Women's Literature. :) Yay for the woman power! I am glad she decided to keep corresponding with him.
This seems like an awesome story so far. I love your characters! And you two, too. haha You are doing awesome! I can't wait to see what you two have planned for future chapters! :D Great job! xx
| babylopez2008 chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Aw Edward, so he's like a bit of geek or smarty pants?
Lol the lotion.
Will it always be in e-mail form?
| babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
omg ya'll are hilarious!
| anais mark chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
As one of the FIVE lucky souls who read Marvar's kick-ass 80's-inspired comedy, I've got to say - the fact that she made me giggle audibly is NOT a surprise! Edward is so geeky funny. You know, I actually own an "I 3 Nerdy Boys" t-shirt. I have a certain predilection...I think Brooke might agree with me.
Cosmo, you're "not-a-lesbian" Bella is adorable. She is the perfect ying to uptight Edward's yang.
Hehe. I just said "Edward's yang".
I'm so glad you two are doing this - it's hilarious. Thank you!
| afragilelittlehuman chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Love this story - clever and well written! I always love a geeky Edward, and Bella is great, too. Looking forward to reading more :)
| theladyingrey42 chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Oh my. I am very much enjoying the tone of these emails. Flirtatious and nervous and growing bolder with every click. I love the mixture of sexual innuendo and genuineness and self-deprecation and admiration. It's just lovely.
| Jen328 chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Bwahahaha, they are so friggin adorable!
I'm howling here, my husband thinks I'm a nutjob and my kids are trying to read over my shoulder. Uh, no... :)
Some of my favorite lines:
After I realized that she wasn't talking about soccer, I consulted the Urban Dictionary online and realized that she was correct. I don't have 'game.'
The bed would be a completely safe and appropriate place for you to be wet…and naked…after your shower.
I don't detect any hints of multiple-personality disorder
I assure you that I dry very thoroughly – I dislike chafing
You two crack me up. These two couldn't be cuter, and I'm loving the emails back and forth.
| synapsegirl chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
OMG! I stumbled on this and LURVE it! Well done - this style is a first and it's amazing :)