|Reviews for On the Double|
| renewagain chapter 2 . 1/3
Love love love it. You guys are awesome.
| Pink Bead Girl chapter 2 . 12/27/2014
What a little pearl of a chapter! This was so sweet and funny and then so breathlessly romantic and erotic. Loved it to bits, particularly the photo of a sweats clad casual Edward and a little black dress Bella. Gorgeous. You make me very dissatisfied with real life - I want one like this and then some! Thanks so much.
| Pink Bead Girl chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
This was so lovely, erotic and sweet, all at the same time. Beautifully written and intensely enjoyable. Thanks for a very nice interlude from daily life.
| Nannyjojo chapter 2 . 11/27/2014
Oh he was so smitten.
| Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
Yeah I think Dinner could be needed.
Bella sure wasn't expecting that on her first day.
| the autumn evening chapter 2 . 11/26/2014
| Lilydukes chapter 2 . 10/27/2014
Very cute! Loved it!
| posses45 chapter 2 . 10/24/2014
I love this little honey of a story. I wish there were more, what is written here is perfect, thank you.
| posses45 chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
A few words lots of action. I knew Edward wanted more than today.
| newborntwifan chapter 2 . 10/11/2014
That was wonderful! Thank you!
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 2 . 9/26/2014
Seriously loved this story! Very steamy! Thanks to I Belong With You by twilightladies fic rec!
| Twilightfanatic85 chapter 2 . 9/26/2014
Plese continue this story! It is a very cool story! I hope theres more to see what these two are up too!? D Please continue and update very very soon! D
| TheColdOnesGirl chapter 2 . 9/24/2014
| Atwiggs chapter 2 . 8/7/2014
I loved this one-shot, didn't want it to stop. Maybe you ladies would extend it someday...please?
| maphie chapter 2 . 8/5/2014
Awww! That was perfect with my morning coffee.