Reviews for Practice Makes Perfect
AmeliaCullen1 chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Loved it! Why don't you add some additional honeymoon time in another chapter. There's a whole week before they are surprised and have to go home.
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
This was good. I really liked it...I see all the'se AH and...ehh, I like meself some original Bella and Edward. (: Great job! I liked it. :D
tmss chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Loved the story, thank you
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Amazing job! I loved it!

Ari chan
meritposita chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Hey Amethyst i just find this one shot, and as usual with your stories, it's amazing...

you know this one remind me the reason of why i started to read fan fiction, because i was so cockblocked by breaking down... and i just wanted to know what has happened after the lights go down...

i've read many stories about their first time, but not so much about this part on the book, the night when Bella seduced her husband...

I love it!

it is so hot,

thank you so much!


Arosfanfictionname chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
I think you're trying to kill me. I'm sure of it.

Amazing and h-o-t! Excellent!
jaimelotr4ever chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I dam near fainted! Holy smokes that was HOT! Thank you for going where Stephenie would not! 3 ( Hey...that rhymes :P)
imlovinfanfic chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
that was perfect! i loved it
apgirl chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Well, that was HOT and very in character. Thank you for writing
GracieGracie chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
SM couldn't have written this part better.
scrapmypieces chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Aw, short but oh-so-cute! (and sure, hott!) ;)
tite-lilith chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
I love it!

Thank you!
LoveTeamEdward chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
That was awesome :D

You still haven't lost your touch ;)

PS. I was wondering, are you continueing (or how do you spell that, sorry I'm Dutch xD) with your Harry Potter fics? You know, I only became a Harry/Hermione shipper because of your fics. I was perfectly contend till I realized... You're right. Ginny has no character xD.
uhyesplease chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Great 'fade to black' scene! You captured the moment perfectly! :) It's too bad SM wasn't able to put a little gem like this in BD.

Thanks for writing!
KCBC chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Perfectly fits for BD!
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