Reviews for Entwined
Fan199578 chapter 28 . 5/23
Great story :) I know that last update was years ago but I'll hold out hope that a new one will come. I hope you are well.
Guest chapter 15 . 3/24
I just finished chapter 15 and the angst is hurting me i feel like every paragraph im just screaming "KISS ALREADY!"
Ps. Your story is amazing and i love it angst and all i love rose and emmett. So good.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/8
Love your story, thank you!
Guest chapter 15 . 2/21
jk - if you hated the story so much, why carry on reading it? You're so fucking stupid, not the story. Anyway. I think that this story is coming along nicely. I just hate that they still don't see that the love they feel for eachother is reciprocated. I'm really enjoying this story. Very good. Thank you! Xxx
Guest chapter 12 . 2/21
I just want them to KISS already. I mean, c'mon guys! It's not that hard. Just lean towards each other, pucker and as soon as there os contact... tada! You're kissing! Yay! I can't wait till they actually do have some sort of action. They belong together - its Edward and Bella for God sake! Love xx
corteznutterz1 chapter 23 . 8/18/2016
loved this chapter! thank you!
corteznutterz1 chapter 15 . 8/16/2016
This is one of my favourite chapters! I love the way how Edward was angry with bella and the conversation they had! I could actually picture it! Made my heart flutter HA!
corteznutterz1 chapter 9 . 8/16/2016
your story is amazing!
corteznutterz1 chapter 5 . 8/15/2016
amazing!
J.DRAST chapter 28 . 8/6/2016
Hello. Such a wonderful story! I have been enjoying it for a few days now. I really liked how intriguing it was and how towards the end all the pieces of the puzzle fell into place. Thank you so much for entertaining me. Suzan Noerr
Mansdas2 chapter 28 . 7/4/2016
Wow, just wow. You are very talented! I just loved how well you wrote the story. Amazing! Top favorites for sure! If there is more, please update soon!
jk chapter 21 . 4/4/2016
bellas fucking pathetic...why go and drink from the guy if your just gonna feel bad about to the point of being fucking comatose...bellas fucking stupid
jk chapter 19 . 4/4/2016
bella has a fucking shield I don't understand why they put up with this bullshit...bella has no fucking character at all...shes like a none character. grow some fucking balls bella!
jk chapter 16 . 4/3/2016
So what was the point of having jake come over to the cullens to talk...then have them exchange almost NO INFORMATION?
That entire conversation was fucking pointless and stupid...
I wonder if you realize how much you ramble? Did you know that parts of your story are so boring that I skip entire paragraphs and feel as though I have missed nothing?
You know how cops ask the same question over and over but in different ways? that's what you do on almost every subject...you take everything to far...and just ramble on and on about it...No one wants to read 10 paragraphs about the same "feeling"
it kinda reminds me of this page I read in one of dean koones books...he went on and on and on describing the scenery...a fucking blade of gross got more then 3 sentences... I threw the book cause really? NO FUCKING THANKS
jk chapter 12 . 4/3/2016
Tanya is sitting there next to Edward telling him about how she fucked some dude to death...and he doesn't even think about? about what a nasty whore she is? shes a fucking succubus! shes a WHORE...how can that thought NEVER CROSS HIS MIND? shes so fucking gross

and rose? why in the hell didn't bella slap that shrew? when she said bella was a mistake? You should have had bella slap her and tell her no...your the mistake!
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