Reviews for The End and the Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That's very true, Tom could be very powerful but he can't take a country like he did if it not were for the extremely corrupt gorverment, heck it was an kid task for him on book six after Fudge's campaign in book five. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, this is really good, those five really give a family vibe |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know the Draco of this fic is different but in canon he was never evil, a prat and a jerk? Sure but never malicious. That was obvious in book 6 when he was so conflicted after cursed Katie or trying to kill Dumbledore |
![]() ![]() ![]() For own experience the fics I have read that ignore Horcruxes tends to be best ones. A few examples could be To shape and change or Stepping Back |
![]() ![]() ![]() Major pet peeve. If Voldemort can only be killed after he gets a body, then why can't he be killed when he is babymort? He has a body that he has possessed. What came out of the cauldron was a body he possessed. Otherwise, I love your stories. Also your page with plotholes. Those are so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for your choice in music, some of my favorites. The story is also wonderful. I look forward to the next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for your writings. I can see how this chapter would take a lot out of you. When I was teaching and I handed out a really hard assignment, I would expect a lot of complaining from most of the students except for the one who really like learning and writing. I see that in you. Your writing to be intense but be really interesting...makes me want to read more. I am making a list of your recommendations so that I can go bake and read them, some of them I have already read, i.e. Robst...read all of his writing that was there when I was reading his work...have to go back and check to see if there is any more. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore is to blame for a lot of the blood purity nonsense still existing due to him encouraging the house divisions in Hogwarts. Lol still love this story on a re-read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, good, you started to give details about recommendations. Too bad I've read Delenda est, and yes, it's quite good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for recommending any fanfics in author notes, but how about at least providing some short summary as well? |
![]() ![]() Yes! I love Forge and if anyone could make mischief out of the junk in the RoR it's them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() no epilogue?! this was almost perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() ery nice story! ending felt a bit rushed and we never found out who was in charge of the death eaters while Snape and Voldemort was out of the country. But I would assume it was Snape behind everything. But nice story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoy the story, but the phophet stuff is annoying and lazy writing. Don’t give us the headline if you aren’t going to bother actually giving a bit of the story/spin the prophet puts on it. Just say Sumbledore wasn’t happy with the article. |
![]() ![]() excellent thank you |