Reviews for The End and the Beginning
Detsella Morningdew chapter 13 . 6/17
Fun fact: "eye of newt" is an old term for mustard seed.
Detsella Morningdew chapter 12 . 6/17
My opinion of canon Dumbledore is a person who tries to do good, and repeatedly fails because all his ingrained habits were of evil. (Learned with Grindelwald, of course.)

He also has a very one-track mind. He's obsessed with Harry and Voldemort, and Harry's safety while trying to arrange confrontations. But he entirely ignores the other students' safety while doing so. He does quite a lot to try and make sure Harry survives, and even survives the inevitable Horcrux thing, but never considers that someone else might have a solution, or even that Harry needs a good life, not just "being alive."
Detsella Morningdew chapter 4 . 6/16
People forget that Snape in the movies os different than Snape in the books. And Movie Snape is hard to like.

Snape, both obviously and subtly continues to do evil.

Switching sides on his deathbed in exchange for one last selfish act (seeing Lily's eyes in Harry's head) does not at all make up for it.

And one actually has to repent of their evil to be reformed. (It's why Malfoy's redemption was never complete IMO.)
Detsella Morningdew chapter 2 . 6/16
My headcanon for Luna is that she can see unusual things others can't... but she also purposefully is oblique about things as a coping mechanism, as you said.
Incantations7 chapter 9 . 5/27
I’ve read Starship Troopers, and I completely agree with you, and I believe that it’s a required read for most of the military academies, as well as Enders Game…
Incantations7 chapter 7 . 5/27
From one veteran to another, thank you for serving.
Incantations7 chapter 6 . 5/27
I knew that the name was familiar as all hades….
Incantations7 chapter 4 . 5/26
I’m rather fond of “Fear the Reaper” which has camos by a plethora of various characters throughout the literary and cinematic universes, and is great fun to read….
The Ghostly Minion chapter 14 . 4/11
Never commented here. Hmmmmmmm.

This story is Harmony and family from the start. For H&H, there is only each other and family, in that order.

We see that transcendent love enduring over all. The family and their stories are important in that they support H&H.

Unlike other reviews, the end of Voldemort is fully consistent with canon. His end was as it should be: fully mundane and anticlimactic. For Snape to attempt a Parthian shot is only sensible. Harry’s reaction are coldly effective, and work perfectly. To tie his reaction back to Hermione’s ‘first death’ very effectively brings us back to the beginning.

The very end is totally appropriate. They can now live out the lives they so fully deserve.

*****. Thanks!

TGM
HoneyBear84 chapter 14 . 4/6
Love it
Alwin-nl chapter 14 . 2/13
Nice one, too bad Tommy died so quickly and - relatively - painless.
Lucyferina chapter 14 . 2/12
Good story, perhaps tying up some loose ends would have been nice but anyway well written and interesting take on time travel and Harry and Hermione’s relationship.
Abstract01 chapter 6 . 12/31/2024
Oh NO! there will no HOWLERS in this story!
That's it. I'm outta here. ;D
vswey chapter 2 . 12/26/2024
woah man why does mcg know they are timepeople? this is super sappy, like to the point of silliness.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/29/2024
Interesting 4 AN. Specially when you keep him alive as the others morons plus the homo dumbass . Stupidity increases
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