Reviews for The End and the Beginning
Marco Zilvetti chapter 5 . 9/23
That's very true, Tom could be very powerful but he can't take a country like he did if it not were for the extremely corrupt gorverment, heck it was an kid task for him on book six after Fudge's campaign in book five.
Marco Zilvetti chapter 4 . 9/23
Man, this is really good, those five really give a family vibe
kingpj999 chapter 3 . 9/23
I know the Draco of this fic is different but in canon he was never evil, a prat and a jerk? Sure but never malicious. That was obvious in book 6 when he was so conflicted after cursed Katie or trying to kill Dumbledore
kingpj999 chapter 1 . 9/23
For own experience the fics I have read that ignore Horcruxes tends to be best ones. A few examples could be To shape and change or Stepping Back
Sextant chapter 2 . 9/18
Major pet peeve. If Voldemort can only be killed after he gets a body, then why can't he be killed when he is babymort? He has a body that he has possessed. What came out of the cauldron was a body he possessed. Otherwise, I love your stories. Also your page with plotholes. Those are so good.
ruth hammond chapter 14 . 9/10
Thank you for your choice in music, some of my favorites. The story is also wonderful. I look forward to the next!
ruth hammond chapter 5 . 9/6
Thank you for your writings. I can see how this chapter would take a lot out of you. When I was teaching and I handed out a really hard assignment, I would expect a lot of complaining from most of the students except for the one who really like learning and writing. I see that in you. Your writing to be intense but be really interesting...makes me want to read more. I am making a list of your recommendations so that I can go bake and read them, some of them I have already read, i.e. all of his writing that was there when I was reading his work...have to go back and check to see if there is any more.
Thank you!
Shadeymankey chapter 12 . 9/2
Dumbledore is to blame for a lot of the blood purity nonsense still existing due to him encouraging the house divisions in Hogwarts. Lol still love this story on a re-read
maiqsmail chapter 13 . 8/24
Oh, good, you started to give details about recommendations. Too bad I've read Delenda est, and yes, it's quite good.
maiqsmail chapter 8 . 8/23
Thank you for recommending any fanfics in author notes, but how about at least providing some short summary as well?
Guest chapter 2 . 8/11
Yes! I love Forge and if anyone could make mischief out of the junk in the RoR it's them!
Ohma chapter 14 . 7/19
no epilogue?! this was almost perfect
malexandria chapter 14 . 7/17
ery nice story! ending felt a bit rushed and we never found out who was in charge of the death eaters while Snape and Voldemort was out of the country. But I would assume it was Snape behind everything. But nice story.
malexandria chapter 9 . 7/16
really enjoy the story, but the phophet stuff is annoying and lazy writing. Don’t give us the headline if you aren’t going to bother actually giving a bit of the story/spin the prophet puts on it. Just say Sumbledore wasn’t happy with the article.
Tracy Bair chapter 14 . 7/12

thank you
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