Reviews for The End and the Beginning |
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![]() ![]() The Tonk's are like most people. They cross the street to not get involved |
![]() ![]() The Granger's are learning to take the good with the bad. It's brilliant |
![]() ![]() Albuts Dumbass Dumbledore hasn't gotten it yet, but he's going to! |
![]() ![]() It's going to be a little bit of a hard Holiday for most. Harry's gonna go nuts every minute Hermione is not in his presence. |
![]() ![]() Snape really is a pig, Molly and Arthur are dead and Albuts Dumbass Dumbledore sits with his hands in his pockets. Now the kids and their Allie's are forced to take action. What is the magical government doing for anyone? |
![]() ![]() The twins are now in the know or it's gonna be memory charms galore |
![]() ![]() The twins are going to get in on it... LOL That will certainly have to up the ante. |
![]() ![]() Draco should always just be considered dragon shit banish it or use it for fertilizer |
![]() ![]() Muggle Dad your talent is wonderful |
![]() ![]() Brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would half-bloods be sent? Voldemort is a half-blood. Snape is a half-blood as well. I guess you just don't actually care about things making sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your constant inability to keep the story in past or present tense is your undoing. They teach this stuff to children. Very young children. |
![]() ![]() Brilliant thanks |
![]() ![]() Malfoy and the bookends is always gonna be the name of a gang of rapists and murders |
![]() ![]() The ending really did seem to be vaguely anti-climactic in a way. The Surprise: SNAPE! bit was a good add-in, but even it was wrapped up a bit too quickly. It read as though the writer was tired of writing the story and was just glad to get it finished? Either way, I'm glad I read this story. Overall it was very nicely done. |