Reviews for The End and the Beginning
Whookimo chapter 14 . 21h
this was a great story, though the ending felt a bit rushed. couldve used another chapter to more conclusively end it with a little more detail.
Specky Clarke chapter 6 . 7/15
12 years late, but the comment still stands. The gallery was 50 FOOT off the courtroom floor? the most it could be in any court or large room would be 10 feet, enough for plenty of headroom for people to pass beneath. It is a good story though.
Schazmen chapter 14 . 7/3
This might be one of my favorite Peggy Sue Harry fics. Beautifully written, and wonderful characterization with the people, not to mention the fantastic character analyses from you, especially regarding Dumbledore and Snape. Great freaking job!
Chalayne chapter 14 . 5/21
One of the few stories I read again. Excellent.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 14 . 5/12
I hope all is well.
Family of Heroes had an excellent start and I’m looking forward to Harry joining the story.
The End and the Beginning is a favorite and I always enjoy rereading it.
Slytherin Uzumaki chapter 3 . 4/21
Chapter - 3

So Snape has a bad home life as a student, of course it's better than before for him to murder innocents. Lol!
candesce chapter 14 . 4/19
Going to agree with others that the ending was too abrupt. And I'm not talking about the short flight scene, that part was fine. The main antagonist was Harry and Hermione's inability to truly live while Voldemort existed. You needed to show the pay off all that suffering and hard work in a manner more than a basic wedding scene of about a 100 words. For being all about H/Hr, you short changed the end of their story.
candesce chapter 5 . 4/19
Pretty sure the axle grease prank, even ignoring the weight issue, would possibly kill Draco. Especially since it couldn't be cleaned with magic. I'm guessing it would prevent the skin from breathing, like how some actors have died due to body paint. They'd have to get it off him before he went into shock (unless magicals are immune to that kind of thing of course)
Saissa chapter 14 . 3/24
Excellent story! Very well sritten.

I thoroughly enjoyed this!
DT.A.9.RE chapter 14 . 3/14
I loved every second of it
DT.A.9.RE chapter 11 . 3/11
The piss joke made me laugh so hard XDDDDDDD lol I love your writing and this is the first actual fanfic i read of Harry potter. It inspired me to start my own fic one day
exitus.ravenblade chapter 11 . 3/8
"Do you really think our family could be horrible?"

Andromeda sighed, deflating. "You're right."

Yeah, sorry, Andromeda has had a lot of experience with horrible family. She's exactly the wrong person to ask that question.
Antianti12 chapter 1 . 3/1
Oh bashing never seen that, what is up with so much bashing in Harry Potter fics?
Guest chapter 11 . 2/12
This story is putting fire into my young bones. Harry's talk with Hermione while they were swimming was so proficient & dripping with truths of our world today..especially, but not limited to, in my home country of America. You have a way with words.
Guest chapter 10 . 2/12
I love this. Tonks...McGonagall and that conversation. Strong willes women with their own personalities and unique strengths to add to a good story, but you can see that they are just as feminine as they are tough.

Media & entertainment don't really know how to do that now so it's just something that pleases me with how you've weaved it here. Thank you so much.
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