Reviews for The End and the Beginning
blcoachmac chapter 4 . 9/18/2021
Start eliminating death eaters!
blcoachmac chapter 3 . 9/18/2021
Really like how you are progressing this!
blcoachmac chapter 2 . 9/18/2021
I hope Harry is really powerful and Hermione is deadly smart!
blcoachmac chapter 1 . 9/18/2021
Great start! Keep it going!
Clark959 chapter 14 . 8/27/2021
Intense story, kept your attention. Nicely done.
Snarry4life chapter 14 . 8/18/2021
It was bloody and gory and I loved IT!
geenakmom chapter 14 . 6/25/2021
Really enjoyed reading this story!
Soraslove chapter 12 . 6/8/2021
Ya... i wouldn't necessarily dumbles is evil. But i mean... a lot of things that he does could be said, it was evil? The road to hell is paved with good intentions after all.
Soraslove chapter 11 . 6/7/2021
Madeye pissing on harry was hilarious, lol.

I completely agree with harry, it's not his job to 'save' everyone. The sheeple need to learn at some point. There's an old adage, that says if you give a man a fish he'll eat for a day... if you teach him to fish he'll eat for a lifetime. If they just hand things to wizarding briton they won't appreciate it, and more so even people like molly and arthur would probably chaff at it.

Let's not forget arthur was ill-suited to being the head of the muggle department of whatever at the ministry. And it's very likely he got that job in the first place because he's a pureblood, not that he was the best fit for the job.
Soraslove chapter 10 . 6/7/2021
Ya, tbf i don't think the dursley's abusive behavior is that far off, tbh.
Soraslove chapter 9 . 6/7/2021
Dumbles is such an idiot... like idk i know say he's 'good, but does manipulation end and avarice begin?

I'm not quite sure how anyone who read the HP books can say dumbledore was actually someone who cared.
Soraslove chapter 8 . 6/7/2021
Eh, i dont' think your picking on the weasley's, tbh. I'm surprised more of them didnt' die in the canon.

If were going to be real... ron prob survied, only cause of harry and hermione.
Soraslove chapter 5 . 6/7/2021
Wtf, how did the twins find out?

Ya, i don't understand these stories where harry has to 'try' and save everyone. He was treated like shit time and time again, cause the sheeple didnt' like what he said... or did. How is it his responsibility?

Hermione, really was just forgotten in general or cast aside. Ron's attitude in the canon seemed to be what everyone else's as well.. he didn't say it but his actions said it enough... 'worthless, smart-mouthed, mudblood that doesn't belong in our world'.

Ron was behavior was very similar a lot of people in canon, only difference between ron and draco in the canon was ron didnt' call hermione a mudblood, and draco did.
Soraslove chapter 4 . 6/7/2021
Ya, snape needs to be off'd soon, asap. Not that he'll be missed, lol.
Soraslove chapter 3 . 6/6/2021
Sirius is completely right, they will become monsters at least in this story.

Canon draco... idk honestly he could have gone either way. Just because didn't want to kill dumbledore, doesn't mean he wouldn't torture or rape if given the chance.
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