Reviews for The End and the Beginning |
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TsukiyoTenshi chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 Really good chapter! But I have just one little request: If there is ever an "M-Rated" scene of some sort, can you at least put in a small warning? UPDATE WHENEVER! |
Cateagle chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 Quite a lot of angst here as they work to figure out how to proceed to stop Tom, and Albus, without buggering up the timeline too much. I can see where that is going to take some serious thought. I think Malfoy, Jr. has earned a termination but I think divert returen is his the others, if possible, would be better. It could be argued that, without a strong cause to draw them in, they might be decent peoples. It's good that they've got Sirius and Remus on their side, they can do a spot of early horcrux hunting and do what they can to make sure the Dark Idiot's next return is his last. One thought concerning, Peter, if they *do* turn him in and free Sirius from charges, that allows Sirius to claim headship of the Black family. In turn, he might be able to annull Bellatrix's marriage and then claim her vault, netting them the Cup horcrux without going to extreme measures to obtain it. |
Mwhahahaha18 chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 Oh I defiantly like this update. I like that you're showing them "branch" out a little and becomeing friends with others then just "Ron." Also showing that they have family from Sirius, Remus, Minerva, etc. I can't wait to read more of this! |
RobSt chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 loving this story and thanks for the recommendation Robert |
hhrforeverhhr chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 i loved it! i'm happy that you're updating quickly.. makes this story much more likable. i can't wait for the next chapter. update soon. |
SilverIceBlueEyes chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 Great chapter. Great detail, and I liked the bits about Neville and Severus. Keep up the good work! |
DarkHeart81 chapter 1 . 9/6/2010 Good beginning to this. I admit I prefer the idea of Harry going back in time solely to be with, or save, Hermione. Him doing it for "everyone" just seems a bit too nice and simplistic. Him doing it for a purely selfish reason makes him seem more human and, I think, allows him to be shown as truly broken. |
N Flamel chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 Muggledad, this is going to be a short review (for me), simply because pointing out everything I liked would result in a long outline of the chapter. Short of that, just let me say you write at a professional level. This chapter is another example of that ability. I should add that I usually don't read time travel stories but made an exception in your case. That should let you know how much I'm enjoying your story. - Nicolas |
Jimm chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us. |
unsweetened-me chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 :) This is a great story. I'm looking forward to the next update. |
keichan2 chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 I was about to suggest that, as he sent back his magic, it was logical that his core would at least double in size, thus the instability cause by the suddenness of the change, until it has time to adapt. I suppose that you had the same idea ;-p I hope to read more soon! |
hpnut1 chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 I loved it and I knew I read the token thing before! |
NorthernLights25 chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 Please update soon! |
120991ln chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 loving it continue |
almac1991 chapter 3 . 9/6/2010 AWESOME CHAPTER! love how its long! and i love hte idea of your story, and how everything is playing out! please update soon |