| Reviews for The End and the Beginning |
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   NorthernLights25 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 Please update soon! |
| Lancelot47 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 Hello Muggledad, Interesting first chapter, pity it will sit on the back burner. I like the idea of Highlander Mini, especially if she offs Snape. Wouldn't Dumbles notice a very mature couple in Harry and Hermione, Their hormones might cover for some of their behavior but I think he will suspect something especially after his pet DE (Snape) buys it. Fong, where have I heard it before? Knights Tale maybe? Frak is also another good one for Harry to use. I'm surprised Hermione allows him to use an alternative cuss word. I eagerly look forward to the next chapter whenever that may be. :) Regards, Lancelot 47 PS did you recive my e-mail re your review response |
| Wolfric chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 Seems like a good start. If your going to "borrow" something you might as well use something good. Thanks for writing. W. |
| hpnut1 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 I loved, loved, loved the start of this one! |
| malko050987 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 A time travel story where they're not afraid to make big changes is a good thing. :D Chris |
| dennisud chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 A good start and you've already set the inner circle of Harry & Hermione's allies. I hope you see that through. My only question will be if Ron & Ginny will be developed more to be mor likable and proper allies and not 2-dimensional gits. Oh and good to set Neville & Luna together as IMHO those two with Harry & Hermione are my favorites! And if not Hermione then Luna for Harry and the opposite is true for Neville. Good luck with all your writing! dennisud |
| happylady chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 I love it and post on this when and if you can I can wait, or not, hehe Until next time Gloria |
| 120991ln chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 continue loving it |
| roshane chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 i think this fic is awesome, i can't wait for you to get rid of that greasy git snipe and that ass wipe molfoy, please update soon. |
| mwinter1 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 i hope they get Professor Flitwick and Moody on board. |
| Nosferatum chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 Well... It's been done to death but if you'll be able to come up with something original, why not? |
| rio45 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 Way to go mate that was brilliant as usual I like the plot and as they said why fix it if it ain't broke lol. I'm looking forward to more and I like the differences that you have made. |
| librarywitch chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 Oh yeah! New muggledad story. Me happy happy joy joy! Awesome start on this tale. True love is the only reason to go through all that! Sev and Peter are so screwed. Well done as always and I am looking forward to the rest of the tale! |
| Proponent of EVO chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 Wo! New story! Thank you! |
| RobC chapter 1 . 2/28/2010 Very nice start. Hope this bunny doesn't let go. Rob |