Reviews for The End and the Beginning
CarolsSister chapter 1 . 10/25/2020
Nice.
suziq968 chapter 14 . 10/13/2020
Once again, awesome story!
suziq968 chapter 4 . 10/12/2020
So out of curiosity if we table an issue for later did that incredibly annoying statement of putting a pin in it come from the Brits? If so, can you think of an appropriate revenge?
witowsmp chapter 12 . 10/3/2020
I agree with your analysis about both Snape and Dumbledore. I'm enjoying this story so far.
witowsmp chapter 10 . 9/30/2020
The only possible reason the Dursleys wouldn't go too far with physical abuse would be read of accidental magic. I certainly agree they're the type to do it.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2020
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ALATRE0N chapter 1 . 8/31/2020
whyyyyyyyyy does every story have to go the "Dumbledore's manipulations" route. christ give him a break and let him be a surrogate grandfather for Harry.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/25/2020
This was an epic story. But imho it needed a good epilogue or at least one more chapter of fluffy goodness to wrap up all the awesomeness.

- public mourning of Albus D.
- Ron
- twins
- Neville
- Weasley family
- Sirius
- future of Hogwarts
- accountability of the press

Still, I loved your story. You have a real talent and I’m very grateful that you took the time to write this, thanks.
- future of wizarding world
Guest chapter 6 . 8/23/2020
Great chapter but there’s a small logic/plot error: they portkey the guards out yet they themselves have to swim out beyond the wards to portkey out, and couldn’t portkey in, ergo it was impossible to portkey the guards out.
J flood chapter 14 . 8/22/2020
this is probably the second time I've read the story and both times I enjoyed it
Guest chapter 2 . 8/19/2020
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2020
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Sorceress of Magic chapter 14 . 8/15/2020
Wow that was a rollercoaster! Great story, glad they got their happy ending :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2020
Just started this and I love it but...the invisibility cloak was a Deathly Hallow so how on earth did Harry buy one for Hermione.
Fyr RedNight chapter 14 . 8/6/2020
This was a beautiful and sweet story.

I particularly liked the way how the concept of love was depicted. Especially these two.
Their love is a perfect example.

The plot and characters were overall well written and interesting to read.

Congratulations and thank you for sharing this story.
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