Reviews for The End and the Beginning |
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KristieRoxie chapter 5 . 1/8/2022 WAAAAAAAAA! THE TWINS FOUND OUT! |
KristieRoxie chapter 4 . 1/8/2022 I hope my favorite time-traveling duo eventually tell Neville and Luna the entire truth like they did Minerva and Wolfstar. Those two were the only true friends (besides each other) that Harmony ever had, even in canon. Also I'm kind of confused on something...maybe I just missed it but does Hermione still have her time turner since they came back to third year? I know they won't use it to save Sirius and Buckbeak since Malfoy never insulted Beaky and Sirius is already free as of this chapter but I was just wondering. I probably did miss it since I'm smoking while reading lol |
tomascatts chapter 4 . 1/8/2022 I thought Minerva wanted them to document Snape's behavior in class for her and that Hermione had done so? The assault should be icing on the cake. |
tomascatts chapter 2 . 1/8/2022 Fong Ron Weasley,! |
Fanficfan2148 chapter 1 . 12/30/2021 Woohoo! I bloody well found it! I started reading this ages ago, then my pc glitched out and subsequently lost it. |
Makimass chapter 6 . 12/23/2021 Yikes the plot armor on snape, I'm out. |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/20/2021 It's really hard to believe Harry would be intimidated by a muggle man, father of his girlfriend or not, given everything he experienced in canon; let alone everything he experienced in the future that never will be. Whenever one of these types of stories have a scene like this, it's always the hardest such scene to accept. |
MajinTree chapter 14 . 11/4/2021 I worried it was a mislabeled discontinued story at first. The bond between Harry and Hermione feels so real and potent. I loved this Troy so much. The fluffy moments were inspiring, the action wasn't overly drawn out. I hope you are proud of this beautiful fanfic. |
E.Elliot chapter 14 . 10/7/2021 I love it! |
vivinene chapter 8 . 9/21/2021 I think the characters in the story are a bit too black or white. Sure, even Harry and Hermione aren’t completely white with their killing mentality, but characters like Snape, Draco or the other Slytherin students are painted very black. I mean Draco is 13. With all that happened in the first and second year I think Draco is just a bully at this point and not a rapist and not so far gone that he’s beyond redemption. I think it’s a bit boring without more varied backgrounds. Everyone is either on the good side or they kill them one by one. |
blcoachmac chapter 14 . 9/20/2021 Great job! Thoroughly enjoyed this! |
blcoachmac chapter 8 . 9/19/2021 Dumbledore is a shit! He needs to be dealt with! |
blcoachmac chapter 7 . 9/19/2021 Yes!Yes! Malfoy are done, hate they couldn't save Marissa but, |
blcoachmac chapter 6 . 9/19/2021 Malfoy needs to die next! |
blcoachmac chapter 5 . 9/19/2021 They are gonna have to kill more than they stated because the DE's are just evil! |