Reviews for Moonlit
GuardiolaDragons chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
I am intrigued and very much looking forward to more.

First your characterization of Bella, even after the first chapter, is flawless and you've made her clumbsy nature somewhat bemusing.

I love the way you write about Doctor Cullen, seriously I cannot help but smile throughout reading the section about him. You make him become my favorite character all over again.

I have to say that was a very good description of his examination of Bella,. I could see the whole seen and I totally had a flash back of the scene in the Twilight movie during reading this.

I like how you've made Carlisle single in this by the way.

Looking forward to more.

Hope you're well.

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