Reviews for The Difference Between X and Y
itsbloomagic chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Hehe, very nice. Great o/s! I kinda expected Edward to take it, and I loved the way you described how everyone is reacting to what they're doing. VERY hot. I might have to wake up my gf... ;)
Moony Ju chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Please! Tell me you're going to make this story a multi-chapterd one?

This was increadbly amazing! Seriously!

I loved the bar conversations... I agree with them, why choose?

Loved the part where Edward says he wanted to know what Jasper was thinking, and Jasper what Edward was feeling...

And everything... The lemons were amazing, really good, but it was nice that your story wasn't only one big lemon.

I really loved this!
carebearofpeace chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
.just...*cough*...nice...im gonna..*cough*...go...shower.. (
rickiebeaumont chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
That was fucking hot! Too bad it was a one shot. Maybe a sequal of the shower?
mychemfan201 chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
oh my. my brain just got fried ;) loved it.
kim67255 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
This was so hot. I loved it. I will have to read the stories you recommeded now. Great job.
Daviana Roze chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
I just have one word to say...Amazing. I'd never imagined that threesome together...I liked it. Keep writing!
Atlaxxxx chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
What exactly do you have to be nervous about? That was amazing :] Sexy, hot, incredibly arousing, stuff like that ;]

Anyways, it was great :] Really :D And I'll definitely check out your recommended stories so I thank you in advance :]
A Little Distracted chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Loved it! It was hot and yummy! I could use a cold shower now... or maybe I will wake up the hubby... Hm! keep up the good work!
ainsleyhayes chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Holy CRAP. J/E/B are my OTP, so this is seriously food for my soul. Can I just say how much I wish I were Bella in this yummy goodness? Cause really... I wish that, a lot. Thank you so much for writing, and if you ever feel so inclined to write J/E/B again... well I certainly wouldn't complain. ;-P I'm going to go check out the rest of your fic, now!
Little Evil Pixie chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
the same way guys love girl on girl action i love me some guy on guy. this was so hot.
Skullprincess46 chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
this is one of the best lemons i have ever read. good job
Strae chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Haha, wow, this was great. Wonderful job :)
jasminenh chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
That was just hot amazing-ness - MORE PLEASE! xo yarnslinger
KinTheFlo chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
The Morning After: feeling disheveled and sore. and only want more :). I think a BJ outtake is in order! What a tease you are! I LOVED it. no bleach in my eyes - just yummy slashy citrus.
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