|Reviews for RPGs|
| chartwilightmom chapter 5 . 3/2/2011
oh wow! so imaginative eddie boy is in this one
they need to visit a D/s club or camp
thinking, edward the pool boy would be nice for bella
or flip the teacher one you have done before
edward the shy student, bella the instructor
hot hot hot!
| me-time chapter 5 . 3/1/2011
I just finished reading midnight desire and the rpg's over the last few days. I found myself reading the last rpg on my blackberry at my kids' religious school fundraiser of all places. I know, such the epitome of virtue! To top it off, I set down my phone while the story was open in my browser and forgot it when my attention was diverted elsewhere. Thankfully, my phone with its not so religious school friendly story was left undisturbed. I can't even imagine the fallout of someone finding my phone and my love affair with the monster!
| Toni Masen chapter 5 . 2/27/2011
O.M.G 'The Monster' is such a magnificent creature, he's such a whore! Midnight Desire and RPGs...WONDERFUL!
| greeklove chapter 5 . 2/21/2011
Loved the new chapter as always...can't wait for Bella's fantasies
| Ithilwen K-Bane chapter 5 . 2/13/2011
It's late. I have work tomorrow. OH YEAH.
Oh dear. Ancient Rome? Napoleon? There are so many ways this could go.
The semi-non-consentual is not doing it for me, but hey, different for different people.
I don't think this story needs scenes dedicated to their regular lives. It has a unique structure that shouldn't be compromised. Simply alluding to what is happening elsewhere, showing an engagement ring on Bella's finger, perhaps, would be enough to show time passing and things changing.
| Thelma lue chapter 5 . 2/13/2011
looking sooooo forward to the next chapter. I love your writing-very descriptive and fuckhot. Looking forward to reading more from you
| Modern Audrey chapter 5 . 2/13/2011
Umm, I just kind of can't get over the fact that the chapter wasn't originally built around Bella. The whole idea of character/fangirl fic really squicks me out. Fantasizing is one thing, but...there's just something inherently creepy and pathetic about taking it to that extent. I love the story, but I could do without chapter 5.
| Twilight44 chapter 5 . 2/10/2011
Where do you come up with this stuff - that was hot!
| RosaBella75 chapter 5 . 2/7/2011
This needs more reviews so I'm reviewing here too! :D
Really grateful to the auction winner for her generosity as well as for the subject matter! xxooxxoo
Thanks for fueling our own inner pervs so VERY well!
| twijie chapter 5 . 2/7/2011
That was hot! And I would also love to read snippets about their life outside the RPGs.
| Evelyne-raconte chapter 5 . 2/6/2011
Well Well Well, that was ABSOLUTELY GREAT !
Edward's fantasies have no limits, for our greatest pleasure.
Thank you so much for the amazing chapter.
P.S. I must say, we have our little success in French on ffn and on skyrock. A lot of people are waiting for every chapter. Thank you for letting me translate it in French. The reviews are ALL very positive. It's a real pleasure for me to translate and for them to read.
| london spam chapter 5 . 2/4/2011
Real life stuff sounds good too, but hot-damn I LOGVE their play. Domward never gets old!
| LIZZIED1951 chapter 5 . 2/4/2011
GREAT chapter, truly LOVE the monster. Really loved the "swinging the sword and almost cuts off his toe" sentence, he is so cute. Of course Bella & Edward are always cute.
I really like the idea of learning more about these two as they've grown up, please?
Will anxiously await more chapters.
| TwilightMomofTwo chapter 5 . 2/4/2011
I think that despite the lovely lemons and the beautiful fantasies you bring to life it might be time for some plot. I really liked the original and it would be nice to see how their relationship has developed over time outside of the bedroom/barn/den of pleasure.
| twibrarian88 chapter 5 . 2/3/2011
This was an...intriguing...chapter.
I'd second the suggestion of a few "straight" chapters, since I'm very interested in what happens with them!