Reviews for For Want of a Sword
Hazza'z Bananaz chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Aww, this was so sad and sweet! One of my favorite FanFictions!
Amazing job!
xxBurningxx chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
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*Sighs*

Arrrggghhhh. Lovely. I loved that. Way to pull at my heat-strings. Huff. I'm depressed now. But at least that was an awesome story. Leaf: With a sword awesome mental image. Seeing as she's my most favorite gaming character of all time...the idea really pleases me, ahahah

I...think I'm gonna use the 'writing-in-a-journal' idea. Hm. Got a few ideas floatin' about in my head. Well. Goodbye. I enjoyed that.

*silently lurks back into the shadows of *
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
talk about irony...
jennsings1 chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I liked the diary format and I found Green's point of view very amusing (in a good way). The ending of this shocked me. I found Leaf's death to be a little...sudden.
LittleFireDragon chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
DURP. Thank you CC. I feel dumb now. XD I fixed it. That's what is known as a brainfart. XD
Calender Check chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Just a little correction-you do realize there is no such day as August 32nd, right? The last day of August is the 31st, and so the next day would be September 1st. You probably knew that, but I'm just letting you know.
sunflower.cc chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Ooh, I love this story! :) I loved how it was all humorous at first (but then again, it's the game Green we're talking about, lol. xD) then the sudden death. But there's one thing I don't quite get: How did Leaf know she was going to die?

Anyway, great story there. :D

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xXxAyamexXx chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
this is -sniff- a -sniff- good stowie -sniff-
biory chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
so sad T.T

this was a good story
Ninja.Bush.Duck chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
You captured personalities so very well here... Excellently written, too. (I will read more of your work when I have the time.) I don't often see things done in diary form, but they are very good when done well, like this is.

I kind of like sad endings. I can't help thinking that Leaf's death was a little out of the blue... but somehow that's what I like about it. The time of a person's death is never a sure thing. We must accept that anything can happen.

Overall, a really great story. Keep up your good work.