|Reviews for Proof by Contradiction|
| YellowGlue chapter 10 . 9/4/2010
I can't even begin to think about how far behind I am with this story!
I'm glad there's so much of it stretching out ahead of me to catch up on :)
I loved watching Edward watch her in this chapter - around the house and then in the helicopter. I liked learning about her as he did, through his eyes. I'm glad you kept so much of her a mysery until now. And I really liked all the different emotions it stirred up in him - want, curiousity, jealousy, concern...
And the mystery - You know I love all the twists :)
my favorite: "She can count on him always to do the right thing. Even if it's a wrong one."
perfect. That was SO perfect and fitting :)
| Sherry80 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Its different trying to figure it out what's going on and shit but i do like it so far
| MarilagML chapter 15 . 8/21/2010
Hope Edward don't go too tattoo crazy. :-)
| dihenydd chapter 15 . 8/21/2010
A tatted Edward? What could be cooler! I am intriqued to know just how the connection between him and the Whitlock clan was forged.
| FenixMJR chapter 15 . 8/20/2010
loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one
| Navarre chapter 15 . 8/20/2010
I take it the dream was a precog ofthe future with glimpses of his past woven through ethereally.
Edward is tied to the Whitlock's...hmmm.
You weave a mystery wrapped in an enigma, Eun.
| paammee11 chapter 15 . 8/20/2010
Could't stop reading this fic! Very creative use of characters and the plot keeps getting weirder and creepier... I love it! Nice twists...waiting impatiently for more!
| WutheringHeights1975 chapter 15 . 8/20/2010
Ganda naman ng panaginip ni Mang Edward...haaaaaay. May bago na namang mga kaganapan. Sana magka-team sila ni aling Bella.
Kailan ang susunod na kabanata? Nag-aabang ang iyong kababayan.
| katmom chapter 15 . 8/19/2010
Thanks for sharing...
| User123name chapter 15 . 8/19/2010
Aaand the plot thickens! I know you probably hate getting these types of questions, but do you have any idea of how many chapters this story will be? Just curious. :o)
| Cuccicella chapter 15 . 8/19/2010
Very well thought process and well written on the dream sequence .
I don't know about others but I love this story. It's require brain cell to mull over the imagination of the posibility of what next step is to find Alice.
It's not a story for everybody but definitely for me.
More please :)
| Rob Smut Lovers chapter 15 . 8/19/2010
Don't apologize for a well thought-out story! I'm really enjoying the pacing and drive. It makes sense to me and feels very well-timed. Brilliant. Thank you.
Looking forward to Edward making contact. I hope he keeps a proper sense of decorum (through the terror)! And his wits about him. I've heard 'they' can be crafty and become miffed when they are tracked so tenaciously. *smirk*
Keep up the great work. ~RoseE.
| scmm chapter 14 . 8/19/2010
Ang galing! Grabe. Too good. I only have Prey on my favorite stories list so it's only now that I'm catching up with your new story. Prey was really good. I thought it's very hard to top that but here you go proving me wrong. Galing! 14 chapters in one sitting. It'll be hard to wait for the next chapters.
| fuz chapter 14 . 8/16/2010
Ooooh, the mystery, the unexpected, somehow it sounds familiar. Thank you!
| User123name chapter 14 . 8/16/2010
I love reading the fluffy stories as much as anyone, but to find a story that has as much substance as this one is just so refreshing! You have a great imagination and even a greater talent at portraying it in words. Ive loved every chapter of this so far and can't wait to see where it goes!