Reviews for Fall to Ruin One Day
Judyblue95 chapter 43 . 8/18/2014
That song rattled around in my head for years after my ex husband left me. I still can't hear it without tearing up and it has been over 40 years...
this is a breathtakingly epic story. are you there? do you still get reviews?
Judyblue95 chapter 34 . 8/18/2014
I wouldn't believe it if I wasn't in the middle of reading this story with my own two keeps getting better with each chapter!
Judyblue95 chapter 32 . 8/18/2014
resuming this story today after a few days off organizing all my kindle books. have you written any OF? are you published? under what name? this story may take me to ruin, but I'm finishing every word. I HATE how he treated her in 1999.
Judyblue95 chapter 24 . 8/15/2014
Ah! man oh man! This is the brother Edward didn't want Alice to know about! Well done! You surprised the hell out of me!
Judyblue95 chapter 14 . 8/15/2014
I can hear Chrissie Hynde singing this song in my head, but I can't for the life of me remember the title. Damn. The name of this story...
Judyblue95 chapter 12 . 8/15/2014
both time periods are filled with new beginnings. this is a luxurious story and I'm reveling in it.
Judyblue95 chapter 11 . 8/15/2014
Helmet-wearing battering ram. Perhaps the best description ever of an erect penis! The present day part of this chapter has turned me to mush. She's fucked now...
Judyblue95 chapter 10 . 8/14/2014
I'm really loving this back and forth in time thing you're doing here. There are definite parallels between back then and now. You're showing it beautifully!
Judyblue95 chapter 9 . 8/14/2014
oh dear. she knew this would happen...
Judyblue95 chapter 6 . 8/14/2014
I see the pattern here. He lies often, doesn't he?
Judyblue95 chapter 5 . 8/14/2014
I'm enjoying the back and forth in time way you are telling their story. I'm remembering how much I loved Art After 5.
Judyblue95 chapter 2 . 8/14/2014
oh man. there is a lot of history and unfulfilled desire in this chapter. can't wait to read more, although I may not review every chapter, if that's ok with you.
Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Hi! I'm reading this, belatedly, as it's been on my TBR list forever...Loved your Art After 5 series, all of them! Here goes!
magcheer19 chapter 48 . 8/8/2014
loved this story so much!
pauleen chapter 47 . 8/8/2014
A lovely story. I will miss reading this. I still have the epi to read. I love how the children got together to support alice. In the HEA alice would make it. Either way. She has her family til the end. Thank you for sharing.
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