Reviews for Fall to Ruin One Day
Jasper-HaleYes chapter 48 . 9/1/2014
Literally one the best stories I've ever read during my time on fanfiction!
Your Carlisle is my favourite! He was easily my favourite character of the story. I'm usually all for an Edward/Bella pairing but I actually wanted Bella to be with Carlisle!
Thank you for the amazing read!
readingKs chapter 48 . 8/27/2014
This was wonderfully written! Thank you for telling this amazing story!
I have to say I would love an Alice mini story. I want to know what happened with her and Jasper as well as her perspective throughout.
Great job and keep writing!
Judyblue95 chapter 48 . 8/18/2014
To say that I have enjoyed this story wouldn't even begin to describe the way I feel about it. I have laughed, cried, screamed, and generally emoted all the way through it. This is why I read. Stories like this one are the reason I love reading. Thank you! Now I'm off to read the outtakes and EPOVs
Judyblue95 chapter 43 . 8/18/2014
That song rattled around in my head for years after my ex husband left me. I still can't hear it without tearing up and it has been over 40 years...
this is a breathtakingly epic story. are you there? do you still get reviews?
Judyblue95 chapter 34 . 8/18/2014
I wouldn't believe it if I wasn't in the middle of reading this story with my own two eyes...it keeps getting better with each chapter!
Judyblue95 chapter 32 . 8/18/2014
resuming this story today after a few days off organizing all my kindle books. have you written any OF? are you published? under what name? this story may take me to ruin, but I'm finishing every word. I HATE how he treated her in 1999.
Judyblue95 chapter 24 . 8/15/2014
Ah! man oh man! This is the brother Edward didn't want Alice to know about! Well done! You surprised the hell out of me!
Judyblue95 chapter 14 . 8/15/2014
I can hear Chrissie Hynde singing this song in my head, but I can't for the life of me remember the title. Damn. The name of this story...
Judyblue95 chapter 12 . 8/15/2014
both time periods are filled with new beginnings. this is a luxurious story and I'm reveling in it.
Judyblue95 chapter 11 . 8/15/2014
Helmet-wearing battering ram. Perhaps the best description ever of an erect penis! The present day part of this chapter has turned me to mush. She's fucked now...
Judyblue95 chapter 10 . 8/14/2014
I'm really loving this back and forth in time thing you're doing here. There are definite parallels between back then and now. You're showing it beautifully!
Judyblue95 chapter 9 . 8/14/2014
oh dear. she knew this would happen...
Judyblue95 chapter 6 . 8/14/2014
I see the pattern here. He lies often, doesn't he?
Judyblue95 chapter 5 . 8/14/2014
I'm enjoying the back and forth in time way you are telling their story. I'm remembering how much I loved Art After 5.
Judyblue95 chapter 2 . 8/14/2014
oh man. there is a lot of history and unfulfilled desire in this chapter. can't wait to read more, although I may not review every chapter, if that's ok with you.
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