Reviews for Someone to Watch Over Me
janeway4u chapter 1 . 8/18
Your writing is truly exceptional. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and would love to see more. I hope you consider expanding this story, as your gift for writing truly shines through. Please continue to write, as your talent is undeniable.
ImYours1901 chapter 1 . 10/18/2022
This is torture! How could you start off with such an amazing premise and leave it as a one shot? Ahhh!
linsadair chapter 1 . 3/1/2022
I had forgotten about this one. so good!
Maddy Graeff chapter 1 . 12/27/2019
Though I don't like that once again you've written Bella out as a prostitute, at least here I can't judge her due to circumstances.
This story was sad yet very sweet. Really enjoyed reading this one.

I shouldn't have been so quick to post my previous reviews (on your other stories) because though I meant them as constructive criticism, they came out as anything but.
Regardless, you're a talented writer, even if I don't agree with some of your story lines.
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 12/9/2019
I read this long ago, put it on my favorite list and didn't leave a review. I'm rereading my favorites that are Christmas stories. This is a wonderful one shot. Like the way he transitions from following his singer to his curiosity about her and wanting to protect her. Would be interested in seeing this expanded. Thanks for sharing.
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
My train just pulled up to the station for work, and I have a big lump in my throat. Loved it!
BridieM chapter 1 . 5/28/2018
This is beautifully written. Thanks
Lillywhite1 chapter 1 . 12/10/2017
Thanks for writing this nice little story.
debslmac chapter 1 . 3/6/2017
Born in 20th Century chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
is this supposed to be a oneshot? it certainly doesn't feel finished.. - please continue!
jk chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
$40 dollars? what year is this?
edward1932 chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
Simply beautiful.
Thank you!
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
This was so lovely- I know you wrote it ages ago, but I wish you would continue it!
Rossie'Pooh chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
Such a beautiful story.
KissinCullens chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Oh, i don't know how i missed this oneshot for so long. I like how you write a complete story in so few words. While, sure, i'd love to read more about how he became a benefactor to Bella and her family, the place you left it was just as appropriate. Someone will have their faith restored in miracles, come morning.

Good stuff.

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