Reviews for Jack And Sally
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 5 . 1/7/2012
I was a bit worried when I saw the chapter title, but no it's all ok. xx
Detochkina chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
Awww, lovemaking in Disneyland. So romantic and totally fitting. :)
Detochkina chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
It was very sweet ending of the chapter, even if a bit cheesy. A totally acceptable amount of cheese, you ask me. :)
Detochkina chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
Yes, black, black heart you have. It was a bit confusing. She wanted him physically, she pined over him, and then - bam! - "I don't believe in love and commitment." but I guess that's because she is thoroughly confused as well? I love a dash of angst in this. It's exactly what I was looking for. Awesome
Detochkina chapter 2 . 12/10/2011
You know I was one of those "Disneyland is for kids and silly people". I visited once last year, and I'm a believer now. Space Mountain ride was so awesome I didn't stop talking about for days. Loved it! It was a fun chapter. Bella and Edward have tons in common, I wonder when they make the move.
Detochkina chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
What a fun read. Bella's musings about sharpened penciled had me laughing out loud. Flinging them into the ceiling in the office? What is her job exactly? That was hilarious! lol
JLalways chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
Loved this. Thanks for sharing!
VampChick76 chapter 5 . 10/15/2011
I love the story! It's amazing!

wonderfullybedazzled chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
You must do more! I am afraid of your angsty stories. This is a beautiful story! Please more.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 4 . 10/2/2011
WOW so beautiful! I have to read your other stories and watch that movie again with E & B in mind. You are a wonderful writer!
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 3 . 10/2/2011
Curse your black heart! I love this Edward! Wonderful story!
XlaraC chapter 5 . 9/2/2011
This was really cute; I love Nightmare Before Christmas, though not quite as much as Bella seems to.
bellward50 chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
This will forever be my MOST favorite Bella and Edward story ever! Thank you for writing of my favorite things are here,B & E,Disneyland,Nightmare,Capt Jack,The Suite (which I have always wanted to stay in) and lemons!
bellward50 chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
what in the world is Bella thinking...and of course my mickey ears sparkle in the sun!
bellward50 chapter 2 . 7/15/2011
OMG! a Edward and Bella story with Disneyland thrown in,being a local girl,my heart is happy,happy,happy! Loving the story,thank you!
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