|Reviews for Jack And Sally|
| Lenerol chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
I loved this story even though it was a bit upset. The vision of Bella is so generally fair but Edward finally comes to show her that nothing is all white or all gray and he tries she enough to want to test this relationship. If there is one thing we should learn from this story is that we experience ourselves the situations and we just help the mistakes of others to try to avoid committing ourselves.
Thank you for sharing with us
See you soon
I am French and I added the original text to make myself better understood
J'ai adoré cette histoire même si elle m'a un peu bouleversé. La vision de Bella est si généralement juste mais Edward arrive finalement à lui prouver que rien n'est tout blanc ou tout gris et il la tente assez pour qu'elle veuille expérimenter cette relation de couple. S'il y a une chose que l'on doit retenir de cette histoire c'est que nous devons expérimenter nous-même les situations et juste nous aider des erreurs des autres pour essayer éviter les commettre nous-même.
Merci de l'avoir partagé avec nous
A tout bientôt
| Merina Green chapter 5 . 6/22/2012
Loved it! I'm a big Disney fan myself. The story was SO cute!
| lknots chapter 5 . 6/22/2012
Wonderful story, thank you!
| imashygirl chapter 5 . 5/17/2012
i love both nightmare before christmas and twilight and i couldn't believe it when i saw this fic! it's perfect! :)
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 5 . 1/7/2012
I was a bit worried when I saw the chapter title, but no it's all ok. xx
| Detochkina chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
Awww, lovemaking in Disneyland. So romantic and totally fitting. :)
| Detochkina chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
It was very sweet ending of the chapter, even if a bit cheesy. A totally acceptable amount of cheese, you ask me. :)
| Detochkina chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
Yes, black, black heart you have. It was a bit confusing. She wanted him physically, she pined over him, and then - bam! - "I don't believe in love and commitment." but I guess that's because she is thoroughly confused as well? I love a dash of angst in this. It's exactly what I was looking for. Awesome
| Detochkina chapter 2 . 12/10/2011
You know I was one of those "Disneyland is for kids and silly people". I visited once last year, and I'm a believer now. Space Mountain ride was so awesome I didn't stop talking about for days. Loved it! It was a fun chapter. Bella and Edward have tons in common, I wonder when they make the move.
| Detochkina chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
What a fun read. Bella's musings about sharpened penciled had me laughing out loud. Flinging them into the ceiling in the office? What is her job exactly? That was hilarious! lol
| JLalways chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
Loved this. Thanks for sharing!
| VampChick76 chapter 5 . 10/15/2011
I love the story! It's amazing!
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
You must do more! I am afraid of your angsty stories. This is a beautiful story! Please more.
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 4 . 10/2/2011
WOW so beautiful! I have to read your other stories and watch that movie again with E & B in mind. You are a wonderful writer!
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 3 . 10/2/2011
Curse your black heart! I love this Edward! Wonderful story!