|Reviews for Jack And Sally|
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 5 . 1/7/2012
I was a bit worried when I saw the chapter title, but no it's all ok. xx
| Detochkina chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
Awww, lovemaking in Disneyland. So romantic and totally fitting. :)
| Detochkina chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
It was very sweet ending of the chapter, even if a bit cheesy. A totally acceptable amount of cheese, you ask me. :)
| Detochkina chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
Yes, black, black heart you have. It was a bit confusing. She wanted him physically, she pined over him, and then - bam! - "I don't believe in love and commitment." but I guess that's because she is thoroughly confused as well? I love a dash of angst in this. It's exactly what I was looking for. Awesome
| Detochkina chapter 2 . 12/10/2011
You know I was one of those "Disneyland is for kids and silly people". I visited once last year, and I'm a believer now. Space Mountain ride was so awesome I didn't stop talking about for days. Loved it! It was a fun chapter. Bella and Edward have tons in common, I wonder when they make the move.
| Detochkina chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
What a fun read. Bella's musings about sharpened penciled had me laughing out loud. Flinging them into the ceiling in the office? What is her job exactly? That was hilarious! lol
| JLalways chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
Loved this. Thanks for sharing!
| VampChick76 chapter 5 . 10/15/2011
I love the story! It's amazing!
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
You must do more! I am afraid of your angsty stories. This is a beautiful story! Please more.
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 4 . 10/2/2011
WOW so beautiful! I have to read your other stories and watch that movie again with E & B in mind. You are a wonderful writer!
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 3 . 10/2/2011
Curse your black heart! I love this Edward! Wonderful story!
| XlaraC chapter 5 . 9/2/2011
This was really cute; I love Nightmare Before Christmas, though not quite as much as Bella seems to.
| bellward50 chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
This will forever be my MOST favorite Bella and Edward story ever! Thank you for writing of my favorite things are here,B & E,Disneyland,Nightmare,Capt Jack,The Suite (which I have always wanted to stay in) and lemons!
| bellward50 chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
what in the world is Bella thinking...and of course my mickey ears sparkle in the sun!
| bellward50 chapter 2 . 7/15/2011
OMG! a Edward and Bella story with Disneyland thrown in,being a local girl,my heart is happy,happy,happy! Loving the story,thank you!