Reviews for Psyche and Orual: Poems on Suffering
manofmywords chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
How do you like this Poem.

I have made a many mistakes, for you lied
You are a wretched women, though that is not new
What did you gain pretending to be love me as you sister?
I do not understand, I do not know
I never share my thoughts
I thought you were different
I thought you had changed
Its, me your sister,
I was always leading you my hears
As you tricked me without shame
Our relationship is over
I do not wish you well
This is me just moving on.

You have but on to me things i can not forgive
I do not know what you wanted
It is my heart crumbling all over again, With your wicked touch

Stop shouting for attention
My patience is going
I have know given you know more
It is my fault that it took this long
To see what you are about
I am sure you will pay

I dont need your crocodile tears I have seen through you
What more can I want, I’d rather not ask
You’re wretched, a memory I want to forget
In case you did not realize, I wish we never met

Perhaps you wanted my beauty
and were jealous
Or was it just to be better then me
Disliking each success
As if it was a crime against you
I over rated you and what you have done
I’ll also take some blame
But I’ve had enough
This is my life.
And I need it back
siren-girl chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
This is beautiful. Just beautiful.

Thank you
sivan milton chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
great idea, u inspired me to make a poem about this AWESOME book
Dickensian812 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Well done! I really enjoyed it.