Reviews for Forever Was Never 'til Now
Pathatlon chapter 5 . 5/11
Love it. I love that she didn't give in instantly. I think you could definitely add some chapters that showed the space she's created, perhaps.
Pathatlon chapter 4 . 5/11
I wish you told us more about Edward's thoughts. Is he willing do BE with her? Change her if she wants to? Let her have her say in their conversations? Treat her kindly?
Pathatlon chapter 3 . 5/11
But nothing changed. Like Edward admitted earlier: nothing fundementally changed. He was still unwilling to change her, still unwilling to actually be with her. Going back to her is just mocking her emotions.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/12
I sort of believe that Bella will choose to become a vampire, based on how she acts towards Charlie (preparing him all sorts of foods and taking extra care of him) and Edward wondering if she's choosing to say goodbye. However, I guess what makes this story so beautifully sad is that Bella is unsure or reluctant to give into Edward, something that Meyer failed to do, something that makes this story so much better. So even though she'll probably ask to be changed, it impacts ebony a more emotional level if I believe differently. Oh god, I can't get over how much I'm in love with this story.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/12
I don't know what it is about this, but I'm bawling my eyes out right now. You are such a good writer, and I think there's only one of your stories that I haven't read yet. I'm going to feel so sad when I do, because you're captivating. You have the perfect words to draw me in and the most heartbreaking ones to keep me remembering. This truly got me. I know you left the ending open for interpretation, and maybe I got it wrong, but I imagine that she stayed human. And although this is a complete 180 from the books, it made me feel more in a few thousand words than SM ever could. Thank you. I needed to cry. I needed to read this story and feel something.
MyladyNancy chapter 7 . 1/1/2016
What a beautiful story, so grateful to have found it at this holiday time thank you for sharing your talent
Paolina Beke H chapter 7 . 10/12/2015
Such a beautiful and sweet story! Thanks so much for sharing it
Motherof8 chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
Jerk, never liked new moon edward and what he put bella through
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 7 . 12/28/2014
Yeah, it was obvious she was closing out
her life in Forks right along with the Cullens.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 6 . 12/28/2014
I take it Victoria is non-existent in this universe?
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 5 . 12/28/2014
She needed his constancy, and his
recognition that she is his equal,
capable of making her own decisions.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 4 . 12/28/2014
I'm glad she showed her ire.
I always thought SM's Bella was all
too eager to take him back. She
should have been so angry, and
made him work for it.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 3 . 12/28/2014
She's gonna be so angry...
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
The fact that she's in as much pain as
he hasn't seeped into his sense of yet.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
The one promise that he CANNOT keep! LOL
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