|Reviews for Sunrise By The Lake|
| Sophia Starracer chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Very sweet story I like it :) But you might want to spell check it. frost task and she yourself are two that I saw
| ChasingMrsMalfoy chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
"When the sun had finally crested into the sky, they went their separate ways, and never turned back."
That line made me tingle.
The story is beautiful, and innocent. I love it.
| A Morning Star chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Very, very well done.
Especially the treatment of Lily. I've noticed that most James/Other characters handle Lily in a bad manner. I find it best if the author either ignores her or mentions her in an offhand way.
If you ever write a James/Narcissa story, I will be amongst the first to read it.
| beedivine chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
I like this, and I like the way that you ended it. I think the way you wrote it was believeable, and the ending is a big part of what made it that way. Nice job.
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