Reviews for F Stop
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2
Awful, build up ... to nothing. ..
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
Awful lemons. Didn't even touch each other. So bad.
Bushwah chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
"This fic is rated MA, 18 only."

Uh... you do realize FanFiction doesn't allow that kind of story?
Vadergirl2006 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
First time reading this and omg a dominating Carlsile leaves me needing a really cold shower mmmmmmm.
readingmama chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Goodness that was hot. I wish you'd continue!
fallgoddess chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Damn... U should write more of this story
CelticGlamazon chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Sexy as hell! Love it.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Ok now I definately need a shower!
RP Angel chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
'Talented' can not even begin to describe your writing skills. I felt that I was in the room watching the whole scene unfold before me and physically unable or unwilling to turn away or stop it.
becp chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
holly crap that was hot loved it more please
EverlastingMuse chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
good.
AutumnSong chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Hot!

Carlisle is quite demanding in your story, it's refreshing. He's always painted as cool,collected, love and kind but it nice to see a darker side.
CumberbatchedInTheTardis chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
this was really good. you should continue this one
A Midnight Valkyrie chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
I completely f'ing 3 this! Very very awesome!
GuiltyButFlawless chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Ah, bbz this was sexy (:

I'm really curious why you wrote it the way you did though. Bella didn't actually have any dialouge throughout and while it made me feel somehow more connected to Carlisle, it was strange - I've never read anything written like that before..

Anyhow, it was brilliant xD

Much love,
Beatrice 3
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