Very good! I’m favoriting this!

Loved it! Thank you!

LOL what an idiot, funny how he's so willing to be the Bulgarian ministers pawn

Wtf I thought the obvious answer was no. Stupid mortals trying to play gods and create a 'superior' race

Bruh somehow I think I hate just about every character in this other than maybe Neville

Too much telling, not enough showing.
It's like I'm reading a list of things that happened.

Gotta say, I love The friendship between Nevill and the young couple. This is the most hilarious story I’ve read so far. Thank you!

You've done a very good Dumbledore in this. Not exactly an antagonist, but not on the protagonist's side either. Very realistic.

Hermione's really a very good Deuteroginist in this story, you've done an excellent job with her.

Loved the delivery of Harry's cheesy line- and how the narration put it. Made me laugh like mad.

Loved the Tonks/Neville interaction.

Firstly, I love the Mary Poppins reference. It seems very 'wizardy.'

Secondly, I'm reminded of the problem of protagonists getting into 'did they die?' situations - namely, that *of course* Harry didn't die (permanently) from the killing curse, as he's the main character!
Whereas if Sirius, Remus, Sophie, Dumbledore, Henry, Margret, etc. got into a dangerous situation, it's competely possible that they are going to die from it.

Rereading this now.
Love the last two lines

wonderful story :) great reading

Why does Harry suspect the chubby one to be the minister? He is or he's not, but Harry should know - he has already met the Bulgarian minister. Admittedly, it was only short and a lot happened since then, but he made fun of Fudge, that should be a remember-worthy memory...