I love your version of Bill. He’s so great here

Really lovely story!
So glad I stumbled across it looking at another author’s favorites!
I was a bit unsure in the beginning, with how cold & hard Harry was, not that I blamed him At All!
But I love how things worked out, especially how none of the good guys died!
I even loved the change of scenery! I googled that area in Bulgaria and it looks amazing!

Thank you for sharing your work!
And best of luck with your land and horses!

Hey everyone attempted rape is ok and Harry lets himself be manipulated into that result. That’s all you need to know about this chapter.

And Harry will idiotically still fight for a world that hates him.

And off Harry goes to Azkaban for laying a finger on a pureblood.

No second chances Harry!

Thank you for writing its a good story I’ll probably read it again in the future

Nope... Never! No one and not a thing could make you cheat in your partner... If you did, you did knowing what you were doing... There is no excuse... Cheating is cheating, no matter the excuses...

I was not prepared to process so many emotions today. My experiences have been too similar to Harry's. Having emotions and processing them is not the same thing. Everyone has them, some people don't let themselves feel them, some do feel them but don't process them. My emotions are currently making me unable to form coherent thoughts.

I admire the scene of McGonagall and Harry talking while walking/waiting for the stairs. Such a simple concept, but a sign of good writing.

That was tons of fun!
Thanks so much!

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Bill grinned widely at them as he replied. "I'd perform the traditional 'I got paid twice' dance of the Goblins, but the loud laughing and whooping would alert our targets."
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*GRINS!*

Well, that last battle of the minds was pretty terrifying, and ended in a fantastic way, nicely done!

The battle was fantastic, the 'staggered flashbacks' worked perfectly to both provide info and explain the wonderful carnage.
My only confusion is - when you have the enemy trapped in a pincer V crossfire, why leave cover and reduce your attack while simultaneously exposing yourself to counterattacks? They could have simply alternated shield breakers with blasting curses (or other AoE attacks) and shredded their foes without a single injury :(

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"Sometimes, sacrifices must be made, for the greater good," Harry added, evenly, the quote hurting Albus more than he'd like to admit. "The better future demands their removal from it."
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So Much Happy Making!

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Also, I realized that there are different(later) forms of juryrigged , jerrybuilt and jerryrigged, which also have a graduation of shoddiness between them. English, you funny, nerdy thing, you...
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Huh... Cool!

Also, I'm happy that Harry and Hermione did not back down from their 'nature'.
I'm also hoping that said nature will lead to the finding of the Cup... though, I'm unsure how, since I am quite sure they did not find it already (Sirius would be happier) and just as positive that they did not leave their one and only 'compass' with the gobbos.
Things that make me say 'Hmmm'.

Now that I'm in the habit of reviewing, can I just say...
Invading England with an army of Draconians is The Shizzle!