Reviews for I Promised I Would Return
loventherussian17 chapter 19 . 5/31/2013
Love it
Guest chapter 14 . 1/18/2013
Confused earler on you said jake jr was alergic to penut butter yet in this chapter he's having pp&j sandwichs please clear up that misunderstanding
mikaela rosario chapter 12 . 8/12/2012
this is so screwd up.
Zapphe chapter 19 . 1/11/2012
It was a pretty good story. I like the Jacob here, he is reasonable, lovable and very human. I'm not sure about Embry and Bella, I know it is the major plot but I feel a bit incestuous. The story has a nice flow and not overly melodramatic. However, I'm not sure I like the different POV with exactly the same dialogue, especially where a lot of the events were told in narration style.

Overall it is a good read and thank you for sharing.
jacob black rocks chapter 19 . 11/27/2011
LOVE this story!
Sulocasp327 chapter 19 . 11/19/2011
This is such an amazing story! It was really interesting to see Bella handle her dead husband's return when she was married to another man. I was a little worried there at the end, but everything turned out great for Bella & Jake. Great job :)
danagirl3496 chapter 19 . 6/9/2011
love it
mskairijade chapter 14 . 4/19/2011
Not a complaint but i just noticed a small mistake. Last chapter u had jr mention he didn't like peanut butter because mommy side it could kill him or something but u had jacob making them for him in this one, small mistake but i thought u should know. Not a bad story so far
torrard chapter 19 . 4/6/2011
What agreat story, i really loved it.
ozlady80 chapter 19 . 1/10/2011
Wonderful story i loved it
ozlady80 chapter 18 . 1/10/2011
Awesome chapter poor bella but at least her and gabi like eachother now
ozlady80 chapter 17 . 1/10/2011
Awesome chapter
ozlady80 chapter 16 . 1/10/2011
Yeah for bella boo for jake being an ass
ozlady80 chapter 15 . 1/10/2011
Awsome lemon loved it!
ozlady80 chapter 14 . 1/10/2011
Lol jake so got played but hey jr had to test the waters right loved it
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