Reviews for Forgiveness
Doctor chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Very interesting story! Keep up the good work.
tymofey chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Wow, that was... exciting I guess. Are you sure it's going to be a oneshot?
WebKnight chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
This was a very well written story. Concise and to the point. I enjoyed reading it. Weird, but good. It's a shame that it is just a one shot, wouldn't mind seeing a continuation.
Hedonistic Opportunist chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Oh my 3

I actually read this on springkink but failed to comment out of sheer laziness - sorry, dear (and I apologise for being this familiar when you don't know me 8D).

Anyhow, I remember liking this a lot because you really captured the screwed-up dynamics of their relationship. Asuka would be /this/ commanding and Shinji, though intimidated by her, somehow can't stop being attracted to her.

Geh, fail!review is fail - I think I'll leave you a better comment over on Eljay.

Just know this is lovely - and deliciously hot.
Loco77 chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
un poco en si comfuso
zizibona chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
cum in my panties... figuratively speaking, but this was so good i might as well have done it

i sure hope you have a sequel in mind, ya?