|Reviews for The Line in the Sand|
| PinkBlossom789 chapter 7 . 4/23/2014
I like this story, the friendship between the new golden trio is believable, I like albus's personality and the way lily and Scorpius meet and the adults' conversations r awesome, keep them coming, also I enjoyed the interactions between all the kids at Christmas lol
| Barbiejoyce chapter 7 . 4/20/2013
This is a really lovely story. I noticed it's been quite a while since you last updated it, but I'm hoping you'll finish it. I look forward to the additional chapters. :)
| anotherbuskitten chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Morgan Macdougal? Aaron Abercrombie? Those names seem familier...;)
I liked all the banter at the table.
| MissHorntail chapter 7 . 8/11/2011
I really like this story, it's just a shame that you haven't updated it for ages :(
Anyway, I wanted to say that I'm so glad I found this fic because I'm a huge fan of this pairing but I kept coming across so many badly written Lily / Scorp stories that I was beginning to lose hope. It's nice to read a well-written one for a change. Just please write more! :)
| nwyd chapter 7 . 7/20/2011
I feel so sad for Scorpius. Please say he ends up with Lily. I'm a ScorpiusLily supporter pleasepleaseplease write more!
| padfoot's prose chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
This is really well written, and I thought you did a good job at making Scorpius plausible as a Gryffindor.
The friendship with Albus and Rose was nicely established, and I thought the scene at the beginning with his family was a great way to explain what's been happening to the Malfoy's in the 19 years since we last saw them.
| RedCloakedMaiden chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
"I survived the trip across the lake without the giant squid attacking, and the Sorting Hat didn't catch fire while I was wearing it. You were right, James was lying."
Best. Line. EVER!
| HeyI'mTalkingToYou chapter 7 . 8/15/2010
I love your story so far! very convincing prose. Are you planning on continuing? Please do!
| HeyI'mTalkingToYou chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
This is cute so far. You've actually made me care about the next-generation characters, which is a bit of a first.
| Professor J. L. Nemo chapter 7 . 8/11/2010
Brilliant! A lot of people try to make Scorpius a 'good guy', but truth be told, I think you did it best. I really hope you continue!
| Lady Tol chapter 7 . 7/14/2010
Nice job so far. I absolutely love Lily/Scorpius and I can't wait to see how this turns out.
| Isabella248 chapter 7 . 7/6/2010
You haven't updated in a while-PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! I like the whole "Scorpius in Gryffindor" plot. Normally, I would avoid stories like those because (in my opinion) they don't go well but your story is quite intriguing.
Please give another chapter!
| opaque-girl chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
I really liked this. Lily/Scor is one of my favorite pairings, but there is so little written about them.
*Goes to the next chapter*
| Psalms chapter 34 verse 11 chapter 7 . 6/14/2010
Can't wait for your next chapter! I love how you portray Lily in this fic she is so sweet and innocent. I hope to see more of her and Scorpius together 'cause you write them so perfectly! Please update soon i really want to know what happens next!:)
| GoldenTresses91 chapter 5 . 5/7/2010
Awesome chapter! I like how you bring the entire Potter-Weasley family together and constructed their different interactions... Though, I have to wonder what Dom and Victoire were arguing about :D. Can't wait for the next one!
X Ever Yours, Lauren Nicole