Reviews for Praying
Madame Poulain chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Draco and Luna are perfect.

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So sweet. Praying, Draco? Uh, something to see.
Chasingstormshadows chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Aw! This is so darling! I wish it were longer
Schermionie chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Oh, I'm not terribly keen on this pairing usually, but this was wonderful! In so few words you told the story of how Draco was feeling during that time, and also had him jump from taking his fowl mood out on his fellow prisoners to allowing himself to sympathise a little. This sympathy was contradictory to his character as we know it, yet it really worked.

Criticism: the 'placement' of characters at the end is a bit off. Draco is almost at the door and Luna calls after him, meaning they aren't particularly close to each other so the room must be reasonably big. And yet, she hands him the flower. That would require him to be closer to her and also facing her, not the door.

I love how we don't actually see his reaction to Luna's invitation at the end. I like to be able to imagine an ending for myself sometimes. :)
Amber-Jade James chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
very sweet! Good job for putting so much emotion in such a short piece of work.


AJ James
teacupprincess chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
That was so cute ! 3
cuecardemporium chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Aww, this is sweet.
The Codemeister chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
aww how cute, Luna is one of my top 5 characters from the whole series