.so. good.

In the feels!

Great story! It makes you realize how easily Hiei could have died when he was thrown out of the village. And if that had happened, where would the Tantei be now? Scary thought...

Excellent. You really kept everyone in character. I love fics where people figure out Hiei's relation to Yukina.

Interesting story! But that poor poor baby. :(

Wow...that was a powerful scene. I was really hoping the baby would be alive...

This is a very well written one shot, I can't wait to read more of your work.

I know that this story is a little old, but I think it should not end here :) I love it too much :) 3 it soo touching and sad about hiei, an what he actually might have done if the scenario actually happened during the show :)

Wow you are such a talented writer! This fic was amazing! I love it!

Aww, this is really sad, but I love it! It's very well-written, and I would definitely read a sequel if you decided to write one. Amazing work! :D

I was recently pointed in the direction of this one shot by a friend of mine. It's very well written and I enjoyed the characterizations. You did well in capturing their thoughts and actions.

Wonderful job.

So Kuwabara's not quite as clueless as we thought huh? Nice story. I personally would love to see a sequel.

Awesome... I love it. Kinda hoping for a sequel though since I've been looking for a story like this. I wonder what would have happened if they actually reached the village. Anyway, is there any chance for a sequel? Pretty please?

OMG i lovve it! please continue i really want to know if kuwabara figures it out and talks to hiei or yukina about it. Annd if hiei will be alright. its so god KEEP POSTING PLEASE

A really good piece that it would be interesting to see more of. The writing was very smooth and well done. Thank you for sharing it with us.