Reviews for Murder by Death Was Better as a Movie
Karifugari chapter 8 . 4/3
Hiya good story so far tempers are flaring hope that it don't affect there performance. Also, I wonder if the unsub this time has a connection to the last like his mom or hmm interesting
Guest chapter 18 . 5/1/2016
Such a shame you abandoned this when you did. I really enjoyed both these stories up to now. (yeah, I know you wrote hiatus, but we all know that's fanfiction for "I'm never updating this story again.")

It would have been nice to get an ending.
Tie-Dyed Broadway chapter 18 . 3/29/2016
What is this? Is Gideon somehow involved?
Guesst chapter 18 . 1/25/2016
I lied in my review of your other story. I binge-read this one too. Man, why does your writing have to be so awesome? I really need to get homework done and this wonderful story has been distracting me. Good job on it btw.
Miss.Mia.Iris.Potter chapter 18 . 12/23/2014
Ahhh... finallyyyyyyy... or beloved agents and officers have been rescued! This was really brilliant (and the prequel as well). You write each of the characters so well. It's amazing. And though I see that the story hasn't been updated for more than 3 years, I really hope you'll at least give it a proper ending. We really need to know what happened to that 'Bloody Borderline Elizabeth' (she needs to get her arse kicked by someone, maybe Teresa?). I really hope you haven't given up on this. Please update soon. Pleeeeeeeeease...
psychofeelings chapter 10 . 11/12/2014
I know this story is a bit old, but I just had to reply to the thought of you being the only person who doesn't like him. I also really do not like him. He just really gets on my nerves...
Joanna Smith chapter 18 . 1/5/2014
Woah! I really loved that one. Also the first one! Both are just incredibly well written. Its better than almost all fanfiction i have read so far. Let me say it is really hard to find something this good and i really do hope that you will finish this story and maybe write another sequel as well :D

Thumps up. Keep on writing :D!
pinazee chapter 18 . 8/20/2013
I can't believe it's been 2 years since you've updated! You have done a great job balancing all of the characters which is hard enough to do with only half as many characters as you have. Please don't forget about this story...
Colgate Cavity Protection chapter 18 . 2/10/2013
I like it! Cant wait till you continue. Bye!
Minecraft Guardiansaiyan chapter 18 . 2/9/2013
More please! And Elizabeth needs a kick to the face...kindly... But firm...
Mrs. Peeta Mellark 97 chapter 18 . 9/1/2012
Eeeeeep! What happens next-after this? I love these stories, and I know it's been over a year but please just put up a conclusion chapter or something!

Great writing, by the way-i love it
Guest chapter 18 . 8/26/2012
Ok I just found this story and it is fantastic! Is this where you planned to end it because if so then there has to be a sequel in the works that I can't wait to read! Please write again soon!
BrokenSky49 chapter 18 . 7/1/2012
I really hope you find it in you to update these last few chapters! You're an excellent writer!
dragons an' fire chapter 18 . 3/20/2012
Like the story so far, loved the prequel.

Some criticism I hope you take as constructive:

First specify what you mean by "borderline"? sociopath, psychopath, schizophrenic, what? "Borderline" by itself is not a profile, I can see you were trying to do something here but you didn't quite express the thought.

Be careful with how many assumptions you have characters make. For example your FBI group assumes this is only a small operation, but don't base this on anything. The fact is you had 10 agents and officers kidnapped and taken away in HELICOPTERS. For all they know it could be a small army of mercenaries, or the entire place could be booby-trapped with explosives. In the future, include details to explain why the assumptions were made, or be careful to limit how often this happens (or just have consequences to one assumption too many by a "rookie"). This will help add realism.

Don't take this harshly, I love the plot line you have working. Your grasp of character is excellent, especially of Shawn Spencer. I look forward to reading more. Update soon!
The Queen of Confusion chapter 18 . 2/27/2012
Great story! Hope to see more soon!

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