Reviews for Uninvited |
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![]() ![]() I love the goo goo dolls! Lol I played the song as it was being read by me, But my fav. Song by them is slide , don't get me wrong I love iris but slide is my favorite ! Also good story I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() epiloge? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think it was perfect to be honest:o) i did start wondering when her friends would come back into play but realized it didn't really matter because the story is amazing as is :oD...looking forward to more sots with you:oD ciao;oD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed you story very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far! Can't wait to read more! :-) ~Mich |
![]() ![]() ![]() :O O. ! im so happy that you continued it :D at first it was just really good now it is SUPER good! i reall enjoyed it and i cant wait to see what song sarah is going to pick and what the ball will be like :D thanks for writing another chapter and i cant wait for the next one :D your faihtfull reviewer Tich-Tich2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy hell woman...-fans herself- That was naughty! -Grins- So...where's the rest? -Narrows eyes- Huh? Ya just gonna tease us, aren't ya? lol Can't wait to see where you go with this ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I ADORE the line : "Wave goodbye to your friends." Oh, I got Sarah's tingles by proxy. The lucky bint. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Otay ! ... listen to me ... YOU NEED TO DO ANOTHER CHAPTER AND LIKE PRONTO ! this is like really really good :) cant wait to read the next chapter :D man now im like so geked :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :O thats all i can say because that is all i can think it was that well written and also :o because you ended it there ... please dont stop it now it was just getting really good :P keep up the amazing work and for the love of the underground please write another chapter :P your faithfull reviewer Tich-Tich2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear God! Don't end it there! Please, just post one more chapter...please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah! please tell me you're not ending it there? tho i guess that's as good a place to end as any. absolutely love this fic, and thanks for using iris, i've been looking for that song for forever but didn't know what it was! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nicely done! _ I loved the two dance numbers. 3 "open to his waste" -'waist' - fix that and it's perfect. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love all three of those songs and I can definitely see how they can tie into Jareth & Sarah, although Feelin Love can pretty much apply to any couple, but Iris & Uninvited are very Labyrinthy. I can't seem to wrap my head around Sarah stripping, though. Kind of a strange surprise for her friend. And it's totally not fair that Sarah strips but Jareth doesn't. ;) Thanks for sharing. :) |