|Reviews for Burnt|
| whycantIdeletemtfuckingaccount chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I really, really liked this! I think you kept both of them very well in character (young, irresponsible and horny xD) - you have a nice writingstyle, and you did very well for your very first slash-story!
A few things I noticed: The actual slash part was a bit rushed, but that's understandable of course, this being your first slash.
The other thing: I think you should consider researching prep, just for the sake of believability. Lube and prep are two important things about anal, that can easily be incorporated as hot and sexy.
I love this! :3 Amazing job for a first! I hope to see more fanfiction from you! :3
| unimportant chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
This had the potential to be absolutely fantastic, Silas and Josh are a wonderful pairing, however it left much to be desired. I know, it's just a oneshot, but I think it still could have used a little bit more plot, and a little more character development. Perhaps I am just frustrated at the serious lack of fanfics between these two. Work on a little grammar, tone it down on the use of adjectives, and it could work.
| damienasher chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
great! i want more silas fics on here! I remembered josh too! thanks for the awesomeness!
| crutter chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
I always wished they found a way to bring Josh back, any chance on continuing this?
| Josh Fanboi chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
I was wondering if you would write a series story that follows weeds, yet have Silas and Josh be a couple after Quinn leaves. I really liked this story, and am hoping I can see more! I would love to beta this challenge too... If you're interested in writing this email me at , my name is sociopathickid6. Thanks!
| Karae chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Absolutely love the pairing. Wish they would find a way to bring Josh back, he was just such a lovable character. I wasn't bad at all, maybe some of Silas's POV would have been appreciated, other than that it was wonderful. Please write more!
| Jessamyn Dreamer chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE, DARK I KNOW. YOU CANNOT HIDE.
'through uneven pants' sounds wrong, by the way.
I love you.
| Ghost in the Moonlight chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
We now return for Round Nine, when we hear Josh say, "I'm tired! My butt hurts! I hate the taste of cum!" Sorry to be cynical... ;) I’m middle-aged and I will happily settle for sex once a day when I can get it, thank you. Oh, well. Youthful exuberance is cute.
The story starts off light and fresh and funny, with some nice comic touches. The descriptions are clean, spare and simple, in spite of some awkward phrasing.
In the meeting between Josh and Silas, some interesting dynamics get set up early on. Josh, who’s gay, needs a fix and will do anything to get one. Silas, who’s straight, misses his girlfriend and is willing to try something different. He awkwardly asks Josh for a kiss, and things take off from there.
Unfortunately, as things heat up, the story line gets lost, the characters lose their individuality and the mechanics of sex take over. It reads like something from the letters section of a porn magazine – the kind where you think, “Hey, you’ve never done this! But you’ve thought about it – a lot!”
Still, it’s a fun, exuberant and above all, youthful first slashfic.