|Reviews for SPARTANS cannot love|
| Tokgasko chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
cute, sweet. funny. loved it
| McCarver chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
I enjoyed this story. Call me a nerd but this reminds me of the Jedi's Code in Star Wars and how they cannot love. It all comes back to duty and how the Spartans had a job that required their entire life. No children, no wife/husband, no love, only the Spartans they grew up with to truly call family. I am all for drama and sad endings like this but I would honestly like to see these two end up together or at least die together in each others arms. Perhaps a sequel? Now, there were some grammar problems and I saw a lot of run-on sentences. One entire paragraph was just a huge sentence with only commas to separate which direction the story was going. Overall, I really loved this story. Just between you and me, I would like to see a second story about these two.
| xlolx9 chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
That was surprisingly touching. it was allrightly written, nothing special... but the convo's were good.
Your spartan's were boring sod's weren't they?
No offence, i rather liked you idea of the ordinary spartans.
Kayla was a bit of a dead character... but anyway she was good.
Adding to Favs..