|Reviews for The Agony and the Ecstasy|
| en14-07 chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
So here's my review.
A part of me just die- NO FUCKING WAY IT DID NOT WITH THIS SHIT PIECE OF CRAP THING YOU CALL "a fanfic worthy to post" aha ok u must be lyin to urself homie
OK, so first of all the misuse of pausing is just horrible dammit. The OOC is too much, uh. "i control u naruto im neji and sasuke my enemy yuehheeh and naruto u fk everybody like u fk sai and u fked sasuke and u still aint fkin me yuehhe got em" - Neji Hyuuga
this story doesn't focus on other things like Kiba and other friends reactions like the fuck you could of made that so I could've actually enjoyed wasting my time on this shitthole.
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/17/2015
KRISPY KREME 2O
| Shadeofblue chapter 10 . 9/3/2013
Okay. First thing first. Oh My God because this fic is amazing. The plot, the mystery and the character development? The way you portray everything is perfect. I can't stop reading at all. It really pains me to know that this fic hasn't even updated since 2010. I really hope you would come back to finish this one day because this fic is amazing. I love every part of it. It kept me at the edge of my seat while I read all ten chapters. I think I'm even more anxious than Naruto to find out what happened that night. I really want to know who betrayed Naruto so badly! We all know Sakura and Sai definitely played a part in it and Kiba is innocent. As much as I'd like to believe that Sasuke is innocent, the conversation that Sasuke had with Itachi still bugs me. The fact that Sasuke said "she's afraid naruto will find out what WE did". The We really bothers me so much! But I'd like to think that Sasuke did not intentionally hurt Naruto. And in the first chapter, where Sasuke said he had to peel off a bunch of guys off Naruto is something I worry about too. PLUS! Although I think Sai is most likely the father of Sakura's child, I can't help but worry about the connection between Sasuke and Sakura. The fact that they've been on the phone really bothers me omg. And that Sakura is hiding from Sasuke at the cafe. There's just SO MUCH UNRESOLVED MYSTERIES AND IT'S KILLING ME. I really REALLY hope one day this fic will be completed :'(
| keysandhearts chapter 10 . 7/16/2013
Please update this soon- you left this as such a mystery and it's driving me crazy! Sai, and Sakura, and-what the hell roll did Sasuke play in all this? Something's not right there...Does Neji have something to do with this? Who did he hook up with and is that relevant? If Neji likes Naruto so much, why did he just leave Naruto at the party when he knows Naruto is inclined to get drunk and screw around with other guys? What did Sasuke notice about the room Naruto went into? Gah, great writing, great plot, PLEASE update soon :D
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/20/2013
The agony of unfinished fic
(See what I did there?)
Damn! All the suspense is killing me. So many mysteries! I would be happy as a clam if you finished this one. What we know so far:
Sai is Naruto's ex. They broke up because Sai cheated on him with *someone*.
Sai probably spiked Naruto's drink.
Sakura and Sasuke did *something* together and Sakura is afraid Sasuke will tell Naruto about it.
Sakura is pregnant by *someone*.
Sasuke didn't know Sakura by name/didn't know who she was until Naruto described her.
Sasuke thinks Sakura is a lying backstabber.
Sasuke describes the conditions under which he and Naruto met as unpleasant for BOTH of them.
Sasuke says more than one of Naruto's friends betrayed him that night.
Sasuke was shocked by the room Kiba said Naruto went into.
Sasuke isn't mad at Kiba, so he isn't one of the people who betrayed Naruto.
Sasuke isn't mad at Neji, so either he's innocent, or Sasuke hasn't figured everything out yet.
Neji hooked up with *someone* the night of the party.
Neji has feelings for Naruto that border on the obsessive.
Shion's vision of Naruto and Sasuke takes place somewhere they haven't been to yet.
My best guess on all the mysteries is that Naruto's drink got spiked to lure Naruto into a trap of some sort and it has to do with the room Kiba showed Sasuke. (I have no idea what kind of room it was though to make Sasuke be so shocked.)
I don't think Sasuke is the father of Sakura's baby. He's gay, so I don't think he'd ever have done anything sexual with her, even as a one night stand. Plus, Sasuke didn't know her by name and only reacted when Naruto described her, which made it sound like they hadn't met before the night of the party. (Even as a one night stand, you'd think Sasuke would have gotten her name.) She was also already pregnant by the time the party happened. (She's a month along by this point, but it's been less than a month since the party.) Lastly, Naruto knows Sasuke sleeps around, so it wouldn't be a problem for Sakura if Naruto found out that they'd had a fling. If anything, it would accomplish Sakura's goal in getting the two of them to break up.
So who would want to hurt Naruto and why? I'm suspicious of Sai and I'm suspicious of Neji, but I don't yet see what Sakura would gain in hurting Naruto. Let's say Sai spiked Naruto's drink out of revenge for Naruto breaking up with him. Maybe Neji was desperate enough for a second round with Naruto that he talked Sai into helping him spike Naruto's drink. (How did the first time they slept together come about?) But what about Sakura? The baby's father (possibly Sai) might have talked her into it, promising they'd get back together if she helped, but helped in what? And who were Naruto's other friends who helped betray him aside from Sakura and Sai?
And the biggest question I have is, why won't Sasuke tell Naruto what happened to him? Sasuke says it would crush Naruto if he knew exactly what happened, so I take it that Sasuke prevented whatever it was from actually happening, so that's why he doesn't feel the kind of moral obligation to tell Naruto that he would if an actual crime had been committed against him (e.g. some kind of assault). Also, Sasuke may be reluctant to say because he doesn't know everything yet. He didn't know about the room, and he didn't know about Sai until Naruto told him. However, how can Sasuke be sure that whatever happened to Naruto that night won't happen to him a second time? Whoever wanted to hurt Naruto so bad they'd drug him for it might try to do it a second time and/or they might try to hurt Sasuke as well because he knows too much. Shion's vision with Naruto and Sasuke on the living room floor could be quite bad. Maybe instead of kissing, it could have been CPR Naruto was performing.
Well, these are my thoughts on the fic. Hope you get your inspiration back for it! All the unsolved mysteries are quite delicious. I'd LOVE to see how it all works out in the end! :D
| ILoveItaSasu chapter 10 . 5/15/2011
Oh my goodness! I was excited to read this and there isn't another chapter? WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? Just kidding Sweetie. Great story and plot and just a wonderful story overall! I hope you have not discontinued this story. The smut is beautiful and suspenseful and I have been wanting some smut for SO LONG! I hope you continue this so please update! I'm excited to learn what Shion's vision is. I hope it isn't something horrible like Sasuke dying or something that will be soo horrible! Please don't do that to me! :) I love it! :)
| RussleKun chapter 10 . 5/6/2011
Aye, good chapter. Can't wait for the next.
| rokudaime09 chapter 10 . 2/16/2011
oh im so curious on they did to naru. is sasuke the father of sakuras baby? i know sasuke has sonething to do with something cause he said they both he and sakura did. pls update soon. and shion vision got something to do with it right.
| Mina Hikari chapter 10 . 2/14/2011
Well the story is definitely more than what the summery says. Some stories just have Naruto forgetting the night due to him being drunk but this one has a bit more :) deeper I suppose.
I think you wrote the characters generally in character. Not OOC much.
I enjoyed this :) Good work, keep it up!
| rembles chapter 10 . 2/6/2011
good job so far!
| Your Average Sardonist chapter 10 . 2/6/2011
Oh my god the suspence!
Now all I really want to know is WHO IS THE DAD? How many chapters do I have to wait?
I had a feeling it would be Neji (at the veeery beginning), then I guessed Naruto and now Sasuke is my main suspect.
Him or Naruto..hmmm. Or maybe someone completely different. I hope so D:
| Tsukasa.n.Serena.rule chapter 10 . 2/2/2011
Ok so I just spent the past 2 hours reading this and ignoring my gentics homework...
its soooo addicting
PLEASE update ughhhh in suspense...now i'm not going to be able to concentrate I want to KNOWWWWWW PLEASEEEEE
ahhhh so good.
| Raiju5 chapter 10 . 1/31/2011
And here is me doing a very short review:
A part of me seriously died inside when the 'next' button... Just weren't there :C
I've already read this now, and two oneshots (NaruSasu one was totally awesome btw), so I'm way ahead of ya xD It's kinda refreshing, I've only read NaruSasu fics latly... This is my first SasuNaru reading in like.. Over a year XD (So I can't really help it when I change Sasu's sentence about pounding Naru automatically in my head DD)
I don't know what it is with your fics... Maybe I just don't want to write detailed reviews XD Maybe it's just so awesome that it just can't be broken down into details for a long review, or something like that... I Dunno :3
Naru really need to kick Sasu's ass in this one D: Warming up or not, he was a total jerk!
I wanna know what happened... I WANT TO KNOW! O_O
| UzumakiNarutoLover chapter 10 . 12/5/2010
Oh my gawd.. At first I thought that Sakura's child was sasuke's because of the fact that he was a player but then I thought that it was Sai's because Sasuke hated her and called her a back-stabbing bitch ( which I am happy about because I would flip if the child was sasuke's) but THEN sasuke told itachi it was because of what THEY did.. So the child is sasuke's? Massive confusion! :S hope you update soon and bring me out of my misery :3
| Simsala chapter 10 . 10/8/2010
Itz fantastic!I luv it! Pliz update i cant take it...the suspense...