|Reviews for Setting Things Right|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Funny, I like it!
| Cute-but-the-devil chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
This fic was filled with that feel of love but angest, it had the love of raoul but the twisted fear the phantom always has. I gave us raoul sweet side and Erik crazy lobe side. Also it was very well put toghther well for a one-shot at list but I can't flame it is a very good one shot and I love it.
| xdark.flowerx chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
awwww I thought it was sweet!
And a slight hotness...
| Haru Kinome chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Good: Sometimes, the way you write Erik's logic is too awesome for words :D I have no idea why his assumption makes sense in my head, but to me it seems pretty IC, so uber big yays for you od
Anou saa... this fic has no spontaneous confessions or declarations of love and no sickeningly sweet kisses or passionate embraces. Most of the dramatics that usually accompany romance are missing, and I think I'm extra fond of this fic for that exact reason _ There's a little part of me that's inexplicably attracted to the simpler aspects of relationships, and, apparently, that includes mutual, unspoken agreements to enter a relationship instead of the more traditional verbal confessions X3 But, of course, the parts of me that practically lust after drama are happy and satisfied, too; it's lines like "...it was more attributable to disbelief and an almost fierce joy that Erik was basically refusing to leave him alone" that made me... well, there's no articulate way of expressing the incoherent babbling caused by the cuteness overload in this fic, so... Squee~! \(o)/ So thank you very much.
Oh, and I love how right after the little break up speech, Erik arrives at Raoul's home faster than Raoul-kun does XD I think I'm starting to get some kind of odd kink for him breaking into places. So thank you for that, too :3
Bad: ...ummhmm, you're right; this fic is a lot like "Lingering Ghosts", especially in terms of writing style. Which means, unfortunately, I got really, really confused again, and it took me a couple rereads until I understood the order of events :/ I think it's cuz the verb tenses switch too much between past perfect and past in the first half, but, eh, it's prolly just cuz I'm, like, uber dumb orz
As for the tone shift in the middle... You're right, it's cuz of the abrupt change from introspection (exposition) to narration.
Misc: Anou ne, missing the Valentine's Day deadline isn't so bad. I think this lil fic is more suitable for celebrating White Day, in which case, you actually posted early. Eh, that's how I consider it, anyways _;;
| re-harakhti chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
This is quite frankly, adorable. Especially with the last line and Raoul admitting that he had no idea what he was thinking. It does seem to be the thing Erik would do, to have a relationship so secret and subtle that even the other person was unaware.
| Witchfairy chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Raoul's plans never seem to work out like he wants. Good for us and Erik.
| so2460done chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Have i told you lately that I love you? Because I do. And I miss you. :[ lol
my mind can't get to smut without angst either, it's just that much sweeter if there's a pile of bitter or sour before the sugar's poured on. Either that or we're all masochists. Which is probably also true to a certain degree. :p
oh, beauty and the beast try outs were held a while ago :-P my buddies all got lead parts. Well, except my sister so I had to face her wrath and do damage control with everything she touched (I still love her to death, she's quite the fireball). And I got the part I wanted :) can't wait for the costumes! *squee*
haha JIC you were wondering
| xXxMusexXx chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Hmm... This is an interesting fic...
Am I to understand that Erik and Raoul are intimate? As in...well, gay? Not sure how I feel about that, but I love your writing style and descriptions. BRAVA!
| The Crazed Artist chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Woot one shots! The little tidbits us fans ravage upon while you writers try to desperately try to escape. :D Well I think is the closest I have every seen you do of fluff. Of course there was a dash of angst, but there must always be a sacrifice to the plotbunnies and their pagan gods, and yours particularly require angst as their sacrifice.
Also with the 'disengaged' and cavorting comment at the end made the image of Christine and Raoul sword-fighting ('engaged' in a fight) in Erik's underground 'home' while Erik is skipping about the place scattering flowers and humming a little diddy. Then Raoul suddenly runs away, grabbing Erik, and sprinting down a passage full pace while Erik is still humming and flicking tulips everywhere... (Yes I need help, blame my childhood and Nyquil)
Overall Good! Nothing really to complain about and was enjoyed. Keep on going! You can do et!
The Crazed Artist
PS. minor itty bitty typo (maybe) This Line: "'That's notit,' Raoul immediately responded and just as quickly regretted it." W
It was read in my head "'That's no tit,' Raoul immediately responded and just as quickly regretted it." which was a funny, but probably not the right way ;P It might be due to me being sick, drugged and having an odd conversation about banana's, body organs and fetishes with a friend while reading, but we won't go into that.(PSS if somehow someone incorporated my translation of that line into a humor fic it would be that much more amusing)
| Mallie chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Erik cavorting? Only if under the influence of very powerful drugs. And even then, it's hard to imagine.
I don't see it as Erik believing them to be in a relationship before they actually are. I think Erik just realized that they are in a relationship before Raoul did.
| dimorphic chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
That was... well, I would say sweet but my mind likes to panda on the darker side of stories so I'll settle for the word lovely. I do like how even on this friendship fic K level you've Raoul's sort of mildly irritating canon I-must-do-what's-good-and-right syndrome (and that's nice here, not irritating at all) and Erik's canon I-want-what-is-mine-and-I'll-have-it possessiveness. And they fit! Even if the background is somewhat dubious that Raoul would voluntarily go down to see Erik and Erik would not kill Raoul on sight, I really do like this story.
Every day is Valentine's c: and I'm very glad you posted this now rather than never. Please don't give up writing fanfiction. You are the only person who still writes good R/E slash. The only! Please please please.
| Kittendragon chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
I thought that was rather lovely. I love that Erik wouldn't let Raoul go, and that entrance was /perfect/. I'd love to see his reaction to Raoul confessing that he thought Erik and /Christine/ were meant to be together. lol ;)
| Caelistes chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
This is wonderfully fluffy. Simple and sweet, with your usual dash of angst. And I love Erik's reaction! He would be one of those stubborn ex's.
Thanks for writing!
| whatevergirl chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Aww, that was undeniably cute. Poor Erik, he wouldn't cope without Raoul! :)
| Istalindir chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Oh, oh... I'm so sorry, did you not get the memo? Yeah, Valentine's Day has been moved to March.
:D Actually, today is Valentine's Day! Isn't that great!
P.S. Sorry you didn't get the memo... You should look into that.
P.P.S. :D Loved the fluff and possessive Erik. (My favorite Erik species!)