Reviews for Orientation
darlingmess chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
Wow, that was pretty hard hitting. Who knew hero's killed and stuff. I like this, 'tis good and kind of funny although I know its meant to serious but I still laughed, bit of a sadist, which isn't good, because my mate was like; "your a monster, B." And I was like "no I just find it funny that he was dumb enough to get run over."

That entire bit has nothing to do commenting on your story, (which I really like btw) I'll stop now, but will end on loved it, like loads.
Somewhere In Time chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Intresting but too detached and confusing for a oneshot. It's all very well in a longer story, but short stories are best with clear endings.