Reviews for One Gun One Day
Amydiddle chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
He is right...Dick has no brains
Dr.Awesome chapter 12 . 1/2/2013
You should also teen titans fics :)
Kittyfan12 chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
I don't get why Bruce lied to Dick about what happened.
frownypup chapter 12 . 8/27/2012
Wow I was reading a 10-year-old story.. Made on 2002. Lol
Well I enjoy the story.. To be honest, I'm a sucker for Dick in peril or sadness while Bruce takes action as an awesome dad.. Hahaha *evilsmirk*
So yeah I'll check your other stories, maybe you've written some of those.
About the writing stuff, I think that the movement between plots was too fast. One second the situation was this and the next second the situation was that. You need to make it flow slowly and let the readers enjoy the moment a lil bit longer.
But hey, it was 10 years ago, you must be improving already right now.. ;)
pokerfacedcat chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
ooooh suspense! love it :)
Whitetigerpaws4Ever chapter 3 . 11/7/2011
Y R UR CHAPTERS SOOOOO SHORT?
Mysteryfan17 chapter 12 . 6/15/2011
Well this one broke 30 that's for sure. Yes short (and I read fast anyway) but it still managed to get my heart pounding. Plus...a completed multichapter story...nice. 5/5
kagome04 chapter 8 . 3/9/2011
really really good. good suspense. but why so short? it should be longer!
LateNightAuthor2013 chapter 12 . 12/17/2010
Yay! Happy ending!
storycreater10 chapter 12 . 9/4/2010
REALLY REALLY GREAT! I LOVE THE WRITING THAT YOU DO IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOOO FANTASTIC! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
anakinlove chapter 12 . 6/11/2010
very good story, but short chapters are torture
shewhorunswithfangirls chapter 12 . 2/15/2010
we I love Robin torture!
nrstrenth chapter 12 . 9/14/2009
good story. felt compelled to continue reading. "robin torture?" I will think of soemthing.
nrstrenth chapter 12 . 9/12/2009
good story. I love your topics/characters. Keep up the good work.
Princess613 chapter 12 . 8/27/2009
Torture for Robin...Hm...I think give Bruce a two-faced girlfriend who hates Dick...and is smart enough to hide it from Bruce. Bruce stops Dick from being Robin...Dick does it anyway...you can take it from there.
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