I love it. :)

Yeah, the lyric rule is not followed a lot, but I have friends whose fics have been removed for it, so I just wanted to give you a heads up!

Aw, little Shield Liger. It's true its had quite a few resurrections, hasn't it? I liked the way you portrayed that. I also liked the Liger's thoughts on Zeke. It would be odd having an Organiod helping pilot you, wouldn't it?

And my guess is: Kruger?

I enjoyed this one a lot. :)

I liked the way you portrayed the inner battle between the broken Saix and Command Wolf. Nice work!

The added song lyrics really fit with the story, but doesn't allow song lyrics to be in stories anymore. Just wanted to tell you so your story wouldn't get reported!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

It was simple, but I really felt the Raynos' frustration. Nice work!

Haha, aw, you're welcome! I'm just glad to see you have plans for more chapters. I can see how the Shadow Fox and Irvine's Command Wolf and Saix could blend together, so good luck! In my eyes the Saix is like a rebirth and the Fox is a completely new Zoid so maybe that'll help?

Wooh! I'm so glad you updated this story. I think it's rather fantastic. I love the personalities you've given the Liger and the Fury. This chapter was a nice sequel to the previous two. Nice work.

I caught one typo: "The end is near, the final battle I since it." The Liger Zero says this at one point...it should be 'sense.'

As for ideas you could do almost any of the other Zoids. The Shadow Fox through its creation and finding Brad. Or Brad's old Command Wolf until it dies...The Raynos would be fun too, if you're just sticking with New Century Zoids...

Good luck with the next chapter! I can't wait to see what you do next!

I always saw the Geno lot (and by extension BF) as being more pure...power, humans/Zoidians making the mistake of taking that and giving it an entirely nasty purpose. What, indeed, would you expect from that but Bad Things?

Especially if you stuck it inna box for ages D:. Not fair on the Zoid, but you can't blame people for wanting it there either.

I like the very start of this a lot, with the fragment/chip off the ol' Death Saurer block bit.

(Homonym note: you have fare where you want just and fair.)

Is this the end? Seemed as if you were going to go further.

Anyway, this is definitely a very deep and thoughtful short. Moreso, you explored who or what Shadow/the Berzerk Fury is without giving away who you were describing. It allowed for an air of mystery and interest, and I congratulate you for that. :)

If you had posted this a few years ago, when the Zoids section on Fanfiction was popular, you would've been flooded with reviews. This is by far one of the best Zoid fanfictions I've read in a while. You really did your research and it shows. Kudos to you, keep up the work.

Very nice work. I liked the way you tied the Berserk Fury to the Geno Breaker. That makes a lot of sense in my mind.

A note: You use "bear" when it should be "bare".

Looking forward to the next chapter! Good luck!

This was very very good! Somewhat similar to the backstory I gave the Fury in my fic, "Fury's Core", but yours is still a well thought-out and voiced original concept. I liked how you added quotes in as well, which made it really easy for me to determine just who was speaking.

Great work on this! :3

~Ibeyla

_ like this chapter too...

It's great to see Zoids poetry, and this is GOOD zoids poetry. I really love reading stuff that explores the sentient side of zoids, and have always felt that non-humans provide the best explorations of human emotions. Brilliant!

yo, dude. this is pretty good. i only review if i think that a story is really good, so kudose to you. keep up the good work. i love how you personalized the Lger Zero.

I'm in the drabble 100 words exactly camp, but you shouldn't be calling this complete crap, dangit ;p.

The Zero (and any other Zoid in storage, really, though so much worse for the sentient ones) must really have gotten bored. No wonder it wanted to make friends with Bit! You did a good job of showing that here.

I love it. Spelling as usual. _