Hey so this is great but um about the future chapters? I'm guessing they won't ever come?

I don't know what kind of help you thought you needed, but you were doing beautifully! You should pick this up and finish it, in my opinion. You were off to a great start and then the story jus

Y u no finish?
That was really good

I think the dream should be about Percy and Annabeth being put to the test and falling deeper in love.

there cud be an army of monsters and really fit girls nd boys that try to split them up on their created it to see how much percy loves annabeth,and if he would risk his life for her

I have no clue what the dream should be but I want you to continue your story! :)

good story

great chapter

It was so good! but when does it take place?

this mission will be interesting

put more

kisses bye

This story is amazing. the way you wrote it made it sound as if rick riordan himself was speaking :)

(note that i'm a newbie and this is the first review i've evr written)

great start! update soon

This is kinda cool! I know it's hard to write your first fic, but it gets easier, trust me.

Another word of advice: NEVER put "No flames, please" in you r summery. It just attracts flamers like crazy.

All in all, it was pretty well written!

~B. D. Legan

OOHOHO really good! keep writing and hurry!